1D Pregnancy Co-write

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    I was thinking Niall because the names fit the best and I love the idea of being Irish and I was thinking that he finds out first because they are really close and he encourages her to tell Zayn
    October 14th, 2013 at 01:21am
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    Okay! Well, just check with @ Halliwell because she's writing as Niall. :)
    October 14th, 2013 at 01:47am
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    I will I was thinking Niall or Harry. Either is fine with me.
    October 14th, 2013 at 06:21am
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    Double post sorry
    October 14th, 2013 at 06:21am
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    Are you okay with my plot at the top of the page
    October 14th, 2013 at 06:23am
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    I think the dates are far too close together. Three of them are one week apart, with two of them being only two weeks apart (Iona sixteen weeks, Chaney fifteen weeks and Lexi fourteen weeks) . I don't think that's realistic. So if no one wants to change theirs, I'll change Iona from being sixteen weeks to being twenty weeks and pushing the date that they announce it to twenty four weeks because of more complications in the second trimester. I also think two having stillborns is too much.

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    Related how?
    October 14th, 2013 at 08:45pm
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    Brother and sister

    And my character doesn't have to have a stillborn but i was thinking she doesn't know she is having twins and still has one but the other doesnt
    October 14th, 2013 at 08:55pm
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    @ EmzyStilinski
    If Halliwell doesn't want you to use Niall, I'm with Harry, so you can be his sister(:

    Maybe your girl can have complications at birth? So if you wanted her to be pregnant with twins but not actually have twins, one could die a few hours after birth? Or a few weeks later?
    October 15th, 2013 at 01:11am
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    Sounds good toe and being Harrys sister is cool with me and maybe one stops breathing a bunch of times but lives idk trying to create drama or something
    October 15th, 2013 at 01:32am
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    @ EmzyStilinski

    Maybe your character has the baby last? Or first? So it can be like, omg.. Cry because one baby stops breathing, multiple times, until finally they've survived! Wow

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    I need to know how the story will start off, because... I was thinking that my character can be maybe 8 WEEKS at the beginning of the story and she'll be on tour for a few days (a week?), so she can continue school and to get everything figured out because of her pregnancy. And with 9 WEEKS coming up, she can be really emotional, so she'll be calling the girls, and the group can convince her to talk to her parents, and when Liam is finally back from tour, she can be a little bigger, and it'll get harder for Korinne to hide the fact from Liam.

    And when Korinne finds out, she could run to Lexi. And Lexi is the only one that knew about it, and brought her to the doctors the first couple of times.

    ALSO, I really think we should start putting this on the first page, with titles and stuff. Just so we don't have to keep going back in the pages. XD
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    Pregnancy Info (timeline):
    Korinne -- starts off with at 8 WEEKS, and tells Liam ... (I NEED HELP WITH THIS, Kori is small, so I don't know when would be the time she can't hide from Liam)
    Alexis --
    Iona --
    Chaney --
    Eleanor --
    October 15th, 2013 at 02:28am
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    Maybe last and Chaney finds out early but doesn't tell Zayn til like 10-15 because her bro Harry or Niall idk yet also thought of changing her age to early seventeen so she'll be barely eighteen when she has the twins
    October 15th, 2013 at 02:34am
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    So, if she gives birth last, maybe she'll be at 4-5 weeks at the beginning then?

    hm.. I don't think that would work though. Unless we do a lot of time jumping. XD

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    October 15th, 2013 at 02:43am
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    I was doing it in the middle with her telling Zayn at 15 weeks startin the chap
    October 15th, 2013 at 02:49am
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    ok, then my character will be the last, because she's at 8 weeks in the beginning.
    October 15th, 2013 at 02:51am
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    I would rather them not be related.

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    What if we start the story in January and have the story's timeline go until the December? If we bump up the guys a year or two in age, we could fictionalise an album and have the year booked for a promotion tour leading up to the release date and then a tour for the album once it's released. That way one or two of the girls don't need to be pregnant at the start so that it's not all the same with every character because that'll get boring. It'll be easier to work it all in without them all giving birth at the same time, and that way we have several mini tours going on throughout the year that they can accompany their guy on.

    And with Kori, it depends on how big you want the baby to be. If the baby is resting closer to her spine, she could go literally the whole pregnancy with only a small bump that could pass as her gaining weight through eating. I know plenty of people who have gone their entire pregnancy without appearing pregnant. But I would generally say that a normal pregnancy with the baby not closer to the spine, Liam could probably start actually noticing around fifteen weeks, maybe a few weeks later she actually tells him or something.
    October 15th, 2013 at 10:08pm
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    I'm good with the latter. Cute Thank you!

    The story seems like it'll be long, so if you were to guess... how many chapters would there be? About 65-70?

    Kori doesn't have to be pregnant at the start, she could go on tour for a few days, and leaves because she has classes. Two weeks or so later, she'll find out she's pregnant. And since she knows that Lexi is, and is happy about it, she could go to her for help.
    October 15th, 2013 at 10:17pm
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    I don't know. We'd have quite a few time jumps which wouldn't be that bad and we would get to work, so maybe 60 or so which isn't that much for our one character considering there's five of us.

    I think at the start, if we were to do it from January, Iona could be a few weeks and have the complications first start so she and Niall talk about abortion being the best choice and actually about to go through with it following an appointment, but are advised to put off the abortion because there is a good chance she could have a relatively health pregnancy.
    October 15th, 2013 at 10:25pm
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    @ EmzyStilinski

    Since I'm already having twins, maybe you could have one baby but it's a really dramatic birth and there's lots of complications during birth? OR your kid could be born with birth defects! I think that might make it more dramatic, because Chaney can have her whole attention put into it. If you want to have twins as well, something that happens a lot with multiples is they could be really premature?

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    I'm liking the whole starting at January thing. I'd be fourteen weeks at the start of the story which puts my due date sometime in July. I'm not planning on making Lexi's birth super complicated. Because she's having twins, she's going to have very bad morning sickness throughout her entire pregnancy, but overall she's going to have a carefree and optimistic experience. I think it'll be good for the story since everyone else's has a bit of drama, to have someone who's pretty okay throughout most of the story. She might have extreme mood swings or something, but the babies are going to be fine.
    October 16th, 2013 at 06:26am
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    Are you still cool with Chaney being Harry's sister?

    I might just have one but I was thinking that she'll think that she'll give the baby up for adoption whether Zayn likes it or not until she sees the baby of course. I was thinking the baby be premature though with breathing issues like a month early so in June.
    October 16th, 2013 at 05:52pm
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    So we're starting from January? Are we bumping their ages up and fictionalising an album and have organised promotional tours before release date and then tours following the release to celebrate it or not?

    I also think we need to timeline this starting from the first chapter? So that we can link the dates against the week and month that specific chapters are in.
    October 17th, 2013 at 10:01pm