1D Group Write

@ charity_hope
Well we just popped your group write cherry ;)

Ughhh I should be writing my essay.... it's due tomorrow. Damn procrastination!

@She Said Poptarts I realized I didn't give feedback on your chapter, looks good to me love!

@ charity_hope
Well we just popped your group write cherry ;)

Ughhh I should be writing my essay.... it's due tomorrow. Damn procrastination!

@She Said Poptarts I realized I didn't give feedback on your chapter, looks good to me love!

@ charity_hope
Let me just say, props to you. I couldn't imagine coming in late to a story like this because I've been here from the start and the connection still make my head spin at times.

Welcome to the story, love!

@ She Said Poptarts
I'm suddenly at loss again. Wait let me gather my thoughts. Lol!

Okay! So... if the girl that bullied Willow is Niall's fiancée who's also Harry's cousin, do we want to make her a bitchy kind of person? Or would she be apologetic about the way she treated Willow years ago? And how's her relationship with Harry? Will she be close cousin or that one cousin that you'll just love to hate?

Does this make sense?

And I understand that Liam will be angry with her. I would too.

@ broken bells
Thank you. It's a challenge, I have to admit. But luckily I'm on break from uni at the moment so I have too much free time in my hands. Lol!

But in about a week, I'll start my classes so I'm trying to get as much info as I can.

@ walk by faith
I always love doing my assignments at the last possible minutes. I somehow work a lot better under pressure. ^_^

@ charity_hope

I have decided Harry isn't going to be that player kind of guy that everyone makes him out to be in the stories. He's chill, laid back, and that guy that everyone loves being around. He's patient and tries not to take anything or anyone for granted. He grew up in a low income home and gets by as best as he can with a positive attitude. Safe to say he's not as bitter as Codie is lol. I think he'd have a pretty steady relationship with his cousin seeing as they are close to age. He'd be annoyed at times with the way she acts and treats people, he'd be the angel on her shoulder constantly reminding her that her choices and attitude is wrong. He's not afraid of telling how it is :)

@ charity_hope
Hm... she could be a bitchy person, and it'll help Blaire out with getting Niall, and since (if) she's Harry's cousin he'd have to tolerate her because she's family. Like, we could have her as a bad guy to a couple of characters, aka Willow, Blaire, and Niall, and then maybe she'll have some character development? That might be a bit too much, since there is already so many characters.

She could just be Niall's fiance, and Liam's ex-girlfriend turned best friend. I like this one better. And since she's part of the reason why Willow and Liam aren't together anymore, she could be going through the same difficulties with Niall by brining Blarie into the picture again. Like karma, and in the end we could have her character development moment.

Also, try to reply to us all at once, just so it doesn't seem like you're spamming the thread.

Can i get an updated version of the web so I can change it?

@ walk by faith

@ She Said Poptarts

I think I have an idea!

Okay, so this girl is Harry's cousin and she's also Niall's fiancée. And Harry's like her conscience or whatever like Jimminy Cricket is to Pinocchio. (weird metaphor but that's all I can think of right now) And after she broke up with Liam and becomes his best friend, she kinda feels bad about the way she treated Willow and when she's with Niall, she's trying to become a better person but... Blaire gets into the picture.

Is this confusing? And I'm sorry for the too many posts. I'll try not to do it again.

ARABELLA
➥ Louis & Codie (Best Friends) ➜ Zayn (fiancé) ➜ Liam (Lou's Roommate) ➜ Willow (Codie's Roommate) ➜ Niall (Zayn's bestfriend) ➜ Blaire (Her friends cousin?) ➜ Jordan (Thorugh Zayn)

WILLOW "-ish" meaning hasn't spoken, but knows of.
➥ Liam (ex) & Jordan (sister) ➜ Codie (roommate) ➜ Blaire (barista/friend) ➜ AJ (through Codie) ➜ Zayn (work) ➜ Niall (through Zayn/bar) ➜ Louis (through Liam) ➜ Harry (through Codie-ish)

JORDAN
➥ Willow (sister) ➜ Zayn (boyfriend) ➜ Liam (through Willow) ➜ Codie (mainly in passing, through Lo) ➜ Harry (through work) ➜ Blaire (neighbors) ➜ Niall (through Zayn)

BLAIRE:
➥ Niall (childhood sweetheart) ➜ Harry (Best friend) ➜ Willow (customers/friends) ➜ Arabella (Cousin's friend) ➜ Codie (customer/friends) ➜ Jordan (neighbours) ➜ Liam (Through Willow/Jordan) ➜ Louis (Bar- through Niall) ➜ Zayn (through Niall)
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LOUIS
➥ AJ & Codie ➜ Liam (Roommate) ➜ Niall (Boss) ➜ Zayn (Through AJ) ➜ Harry (idk but he needs a connection)

LIAM
➥ Willow (ex) & Jordan (ex's sister) ➜ Louis (roommate/friend) ➜ Niall (roommate's boss)

ZAYN
➥ Jordan (girlfriend) ➜ AJ (fiancé) ➜ Niall (best friend) ➜ Willow (work) ➜ Louis (bartender) ➜ Blaire (through Niall)

NIALL:
➥ Blaire (Childhood sweetheart) ➜ Zayn (Best friend) ➜ Louis (Employee/friend) ➜ Harry (through Blaire) ➜ Liam (through Louis) ➜ Willow (through Zayn and Blaire/bar) ➜ Arabella (Zayn's fiancé) ➜ Jordan (Through Zayn) ➜ Codie (bar/through Blaire)

@ walk by faith

@ walk by faith
@ charity_hope
@ She Said Poptarts
Does any of this have a whole lot to do with me? Because I'm trying to keep up, but I'm so lost. it's 2:30am so that may be why but oh well

If this is something I should probably keep up with, let me know and I'll try harder to understand.

@ broken bells
Not really, I don't think so. ^_^ Because we're mostly talking about Willow, Liam, Harry and Niall, I think. And Niall's fiancée. You should really go to sleep, girl. ^_^

@ She Said Poptarts
And I'm sorry. I forgot to tell you. I love your chapter! ^_^

@ charity_hope
Oops, I didn't see this! WE NEED A NAME FOR THE GIRL!

OK, girl.. let's call her Sally.
Sally -- is Niall's fiance, Harry's cousin(???), Willow's bully, and Liam's ex girlfriend turned best friend (they dated when they were 14/15 years old).

If she was a bully, then she's not a very nice person. But she was able to catch Niall's attention, who is just a happy go-lucky guy. And I don't think Sally being Harry's cousin would work, since Harry is best friends with Blaire. And since he is Blaire's best friend, then he would eventually find out about Niall, right? So.. I don't think that would work.

And thank you!

@ broken bells
Oh, we're trying to figure out a connection with Liam and someone else. Remember how I said (probably not ) that I wanted Willow to intimidated by other girls staring at Liam, and eventually be bullied by another girl who could be Liam's (when he was 14/15) ex girlfriend turned best friend. And since Willow and Liam met when Willow was 16, it's a good timeline for the bullying to happen. And it could happen for a while, since they've been together for four years, and then the whole Jordan thing happened, so her insecurities got worse.

....

oh my god.
my head is going to explode.

@ charity_hope
I should, my eyes are burning. But I don't feel like going to sleep. I probably will soon, though.

@ She Said Poptarts
oh, god. I really hope this is a lot easier to keep up with while reading. But I think I remember you saying something about that!

@ She Said Poptarts
Yes, I see what you mean about her being Harry's cousin won't work out too well. And I like you idea. But then what? After Liam finds out the truth? Liam would stop talking to her? And how's her relationship with Niall? I totally could imagine her being very bitchy and whiny and just plain annoying, oh my god!

And you're welcome, my dear.

@ broken bells
I always sleep like at 3 am and wake up at 6 am and never really take a nap throughout the day. It's not good for my health but it's become a bad habit of mine.

.....

@ charity_hope
Welcome to the family! Im Ema
Goods job on not getting super confused. You did way better than I did.

@ walk by faith
Omg I missed you soooo much. I love you

Anything my character is incorporated in is cool with me because I'm not having good ideas come to me besides what i have.

Also im now confused and im juxt going to just watch

My head is going to explode XD

@She Said Poptarts
@charity_hope
@broken bells

I missed you too darling @Emzystilinski

@ broken bells

@ She Said Poptarts

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@ walk by faith

I'm not sure how to go about my first chapter. And... I need name for Blaire's cousin who lives with her. Who's also AJ's friend and the link on how AJ and Blaire knows each other, right?

So some of the names on my list are:

Sherry
Amber
Alice
Monica
Ella

And... we're gonna keep Niall's fiancée name as Sally?