1D Post Apocalyptic Group Write

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    ABOVE! or last post on page 8 lol!
    December 7th, 2013 at 01:24am
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    @ luminos.

    I like that idea for the character page!

    Also.. I should probably tell you guys that both Gray and Michael are going to be treating the apocalypse as a game. It was the only way for them to stay grounded, in a way. To have fun, instead of becoming deathly serious. And that ends up being Michael's mistake/downfall.
    December 7th, 2013 at 03:57am
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    Awesome!

    Oh hey how old are Grace and Liam anyways, so I can add that part at least. And any idea for what you want their quotes to be for the character page, so I can add it.
    =)
    December 7th, 2013 at 04:11am
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    Grace is 20, and Liam is 21.

    Grace (I think I'll have her go by Gray the most)
    "It's funny... I busted my ass in school, and for what? For the world to become shit?"

    Michael
    "It says 'Michael Bishop, the Apocalypse Champion.' I still have the highest score, babe. I bet you can't beat it."

    Liam
    "So... I guess you can say I was made for this reason."

    Louis
    "It's bullshit! When I have a world ending reason to protect my sister, I can't."

    Are those good?

    @ naruto uzumaki
    Do you want me to make icons for the character page? So it won't look all stretched out and stuff?
    December 7th, 2013 at 04:28am
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    GAH! Mibba never told me you replied!

    Anyways, yeah if you want to make icons you can.
    And I'll add those quotes, I'm intrigued by Liam's I must say haha!
    December 7th, 2013 at 05:27am
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    @ naruto uzumaki
    lmfao
    So am I! Great, I'll send them here when I'm finished.
    December 7th, 2013 at 05:47am
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    HAHA!

    Okay, awesome! I look forward to seeing them.

    I'm getting excited for this story, honestly haha. Not that I wasn't excited before, but I think we're getting closer to the starting line now.
    December 7th, 2013 at 05:50am
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    @ naruto uzumaki
    omg. I know, same!

    Do you think we should have our first chapters prewritten before we post? Like, just so we don't get behind and all that, and it'll seem like an actual story and not a group write... if that makes sense. Facepalm
    December 7th, 2013 at 06:05am
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    I think it would be a good idea, for the chapters to be pre-written. Cause I was thinking we update once a week. So when I update, within a weeks time you should update and then after that Marissa should update.
    That gives everyone at least a week to have a chapter written, which should be enough time with holiday break coming up in a couple of weeks.

    But first I really think we need to plot out the first two rounds of chapters so Chapter 1,2,3,4,5, and 6 should all be plotted before we post the first chapter and once we have chapters 1, 2, and 3 up, we need to start on the next two rounds. If we keep at it, this story should go strong and I really want to see this story through to the end. Of course, that can only happen if we all commit to that.

    I'm not trying to be all mean and bossy, but from my experience I see most group writes go down because of lack of interest, poor plotting, and bad communication. So we all need to work together on this and give it the true team effort, ya know.

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    December 7th, 2013 at 06:10am
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    @ naruto uzumaki

    Alright, that sounds great.
    I completely understand what you mean! And prewritten chapters are always good!
    December 7th, 2013 at 07:01am
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    Exactly, so I'm actually going to be starting on mine this weekend and should have something by Sunday night or Monday.
    But I won't post it until we have more of the plot laid out.
    December 7th, 2013 at 07:20am
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    Also, what do you think about sharing our chapters with each other, and fix up whatever we can to make it all connect, and stuff? Like we can use the whole [ code ] [/ code] thing. It has a scroll to it, so that's handy!like this
    December 7th, 2013 at 07:31am
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    You mean like the whole chapter?
    December 7th, 2013 at 07:40am
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    @ naruto uzumaki

    Yeah, and we could always edit our post to get rid of it once it's finished and stuff.
    Character Icons :)
    December 7th, 2013 at 07:57am
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    naruto uzumaki:
    This just occurred to me. For the character profiles on the story page itself, do you think that instead of their biography, maybe we put something they would most likely say about living in a world ruled by the dead? I thought that would be pretty cool. I have it like that for my characters if you wanna see what I mean.
    I got mine!
    "Feelings? There isn't room for anything out here. Nothing but staying alive." - Zayn
    "They say what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger. I hope that's true." - Cara
    She Said Poptarts:
    Character Icons :)
    Oh, they're perfect! You did a great job!
    She Said Poptarts:
    Also, what do you think about sharing our chapters with each other, and fix up whatever we can to make it all connect, and stuff? Like we can use the whole [ code ] [/ code] thing. It has a scroll to it, so that's handy!like this
    I think that sounds good! That way we can put out an edited first chapter!
    December 7th, 2013 at 04:23pm
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    @ luminos.

    Referring to giving each other chapters first, I say yes, but I think we should probably message them to each other that way people don't have any way of seeing it until it is actually posted, ya know what I mean?

    Excellent quotes, Marissa, I shall add them onto the character page!

    The icons look good Calli, I'll add those as well.

    Should we do a little more planning? Know that we have the groups meetings all squared away.
    The first three chapters will obviously be introductions right, but what about the chapters after that?

    We know that they are all meeting up in the end of chapter six, like after the big battle through the hoard they all come together and such, but where are they going to escape to? A ranch, farm, or maybe they find a park rangers station, or even a lumber yard they can hide away in the office or the truck shop, maybe they just find a diner to hunker down in. What are you guys thinking? And we don't have to do it like that, I'm just saying these are possible ideas.
    December 7th, 2013 at 05:04pm
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    @ naruto uzumaki
    I swear I replied to this earlier Grr

    What's going to happen after they get to the escape place?? That'll probably help decide.
    December 7th, 2013 at 06:52pm
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    Well let's say they escape and find like an old milk farm. Let's say they stay for a night and the next morning maybe they can discuss if they should stay at this milk farm. Then maybe they after they all decide to stay some of their weapons go missing and turns out they are not alone on this farm, someone is watching them. And this person can have a family and they are starving, so they trick them into letting them into the group. But our character figure this out when let's say two of them go missing? They aren't dead...yet, but that's what this family is planning on doing. Killing the two and then eating them?

    Is that too intense or would that work, cause I remember Calli mention cannibalism. That could be the first story arc after the introduction.

    So like first six chapters: Grouping Together.
    Then chapters 7 through maybe 11 could be: cannibalism?

    Then after that we can have them living out in the wild for a while to start up some good romance and drama?

    Just all ideas that I've thought about for the story, but do you ladies have any ideas of what you'd like to see in the story?
    December 8th, 2013 at 12:15am
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    Ladies, I have began working on the first chapter. Are you guys ready to start yet? I'm not gonna post the chapter just yet, but I don't want to rush you guys either.
    December 8th, 2013 at 11:23pm
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    @ naruto uzumaki
    IOMG THAT IDEA, I LIEK IT.!

    I mean, it is a zombie story, so there has to be gore and stuff in it. xD We're not actually going to describe how they're gonna eat them.

    Yeah, like maybe during the whole cannibalism scare, they could like get closer to a boy to feel.. comforted? I don't' know, and so the after romance would work!

    The only thing I thought of was the cannibals, other than that I don't have anymore ideas. XD
    December 9th, 2013 at 02:16am