@ Poirot's Moustache As in edited by one of the Mibba readers on Beta? I don't have an issue with that. If you want it to be edited, you can, it's your story :)
@ Unspoken_Lies If you want to take the same idea that's okay. Maybe try switching perspective? Is that what you mean? It would need to have a shift in order for it to count. Say have it be told from Y's pov for one and x's Pov for another? Do you get what I meant?
@ Unspoken_Lies If that's the case, it would make you have the same score for both sections. I hadn't really thought about that though. So I'm not sure how that would work really.