Cherry's Editing Stop

I will read full stories, articles, poems, etc. I am currently in college, working on my double majors for my masters in both psychology and social work. Summer is open for me and I am looking for something to keep myself busy and keep my English skills sharp.

Please specify if you would like me to

~Just look at one chapter, or the entire work
~Do a simple grammar edit or be more analytical
~Help you with character and/ or story development

*******I will take up to 5 requests at one time*******

Thank you!!

Hello! I have a story that needs some deep grammatical and plot wise help. It's a HP fan-fiction called Thick Smoke. I have been informed it needs another eye and I would like if you could help me.
Here is the link: http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/605243/Thick-Smoke/

Thank you!