Some type of Avenged story?!

Now this is my first time doing this type of thing. I’ve never written anything other then for myself and my own personal readings. This won’t be perfect so please don’t judge buuttttt constructive criticism is welcome to a budding writer. The characters in this story are as follows with more to be added later if wanted :) I suggested to a friend of mine on Instagram that doing this could be fun so here I am starting off the story.

Leana Sullivan
Wife of Jimmy Sullivan aka The Rev for A7X
Two children aged 6 and 4 with another one on the way.

James Sullivan aka The Rev
Married to Leana for 8 years
Drummer
Father to two manic children whom he loves dearly.
Food and film addict

(I would add pictures if I knew how guys. Sorry)

||

Leana had just been for lunch with her husband Jimmy at their favorite restaurant before he had to go back to the studio. The guys were planning their next album for the autumn time. The July heat had made her car a fire pit and at 7 months pregnant it wasn’t fun. It was hot sticky and she felt like whale. She already had her hands full with a 6 and 4 year old. Who both had their dads manic tendencies. The bad had had a difficult time in late 09, but luckily they’d managed to get Jimmy to hospital on time. 5 months later in April of 2010, he was finally released back home. A relief to all family and friends.
Leana looked at her clock on the car and groaned, it was 2:04 and if she didn’t get the house on time the delivery she was expecting for the children wouldn’t be signed for. And she couldn’t miss it.

Turning on the car and speeding off out of the car park she drove on. Now she wasn’t paying to much attention to what was in front of her maybe she should’be been. 20 minutes into her journey and she was almost home. But as she got up to the lights Leana didn’t notice the red light, she didn’t see the two cars to the left of her. Turning her head for a second before smacking her head against the glass of her car, her head and body flung forward into the front window of her car. Leanas car had spun around and was now half way across the intersection of the highway. The last thing Leana thought about before she blacked out was her family and her unborn baby.