Favorite Story You've Written

  • the rain falls blue

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    I like this one. But no one has commented yet.

    Then I Crashed into you
    September 21st, 2007 at 07:47am
  • folie a dru.

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    I'm really proud of my newest: Snapshot.
    I think maybe because it's inspired by a book by my favorite author and it didn't turn out totally shitty.
    September 21st, 2007 at 09:59am
  • the dream maker.

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    I'm proud of my current one that I'm working on. I think maybe it's because it has the most unique idea I had.

    That's The Name of the Game, Isn't It?
    September 22nd, 2007 at 05:24am
  • dr. faustus

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    Beautiful Mind: is one of my best stories I think. It's creative, original, and beyond some of the other things I read on Mibba.

    Explosions In The Sky: the series of OneShots, which are all originals mean a lot to me.
    September 22nd, 2007 at 01:18pm
  • Spaztastic

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    Over half my stories are on INO, so the ones I like are actually here.

    The Blackest Years: It's my longest original fiction that doesn't drag out. I feel like it has a story line that no one else has written before on here.

    The World Set On Fire: It tells who I really am - gives my personality, views on life and how I want to live my life - yet it takes place in 1977 England. I feel that it is one of my best since people are getting what I want to say, and by doing that they're learning who I am. Also, I haven't seen any other stories with my story line.
    September 24th, 2007 at 02:19am
  • The Rumor

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    Definitely, definitely Mislaid & Irretrievable. That story's my baby, I always refer to it as 'my song to sing' because I pour my heart and soul into it.
    I'm going to give it to MCR this November. *fingers crossed*
    September 25th, 2007 at 11:01pm
  • Heartstrings.

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    I dunno why, but I think my best and most professional story I have ever written, Losing Yourself, has no comments but I really love it. I am most proudest of it. And, really, if I say so myself, its not flawless but not like totally bad. I think it has a plot even at two chapters and I have the other 4 written out already.
    September 26th, 2007 at 09:46pm
  • cheer up charlie

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    I like my newest story, Welcome To My World, Stranger. It's a story people are actually liking, and it's original to me, because I've never written something like it before.

    Welcome To My World, Stranger is about a boy called Christopher and his many problems. His parents, his enemies and himself.
    Most of his lunch and recess times are spent reading graffiti in bathroom stalls, hiding from the school bully, Arden. How thrilling once Arden is in hospital, his parents stop being so violent (as it seems) and he finds a new friend.
    You will be shocked in the result of Arden's hospitalisation, the 'niceness' of his parents and his new friendship.

    Christopher is... Oddly normal.

    Although my sentences are some what shorter in this story, that is the effect I'm trying to get. If you've ever read any of Paul Jenning's stuff, then you'll know he uses that method, too (in his short-stories).
    It was actually inspired by BrokenGameBoy's story: This Town Is Just A Place For You To Drown. Even though This Town Is... is a work in progress, it is already a wonderful story with some funny characters.

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    I also like the very first story I posted on Mibba: The Unprotected, although I only have 2 subscribers who don't give feedback. At first, I was extremely proud of this story and couldn't wait to get it on Mibba. I was disappointed, though when nobody commented to say the good parts about my writing, and the downfalls.
    Feedback is really important for me, because I want to become a better writer; it is a thing I love doing and want to do later in life, too.
    I have only written 23 chapters for The Unprotected (some chapters being fairly short), but I haven't written anymore of it since, probably May. I am really disappointed with myself because of it, but I haven't had any enthusiasm to write anymore of it.
    The Unprotected is about 2 boys and their journey to Silverkeep; a school where they must learn several skills to fight in the long-awaited war.

    There is a prophecy, which begins to become true when Rion and Joban find 2 ancient medallions, both made by Foron, the founder of Silverkeep.
    When Foron appears to Rion and Joban one afternoon, the boys are informed of their roles in the war. Unsure at first, they pay a visit to an elderly friend who tells them of the prophecy and persuades them to go.

    Once they enter the Foron Forest, they can't go back. They will fight.


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    :oops: sorry if that was too long.
    September 30th, 2007 at 05:33pm
  • Heartswell.

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    I'm proud of both of Despair & Lies[/url]-->Despair & Lies and But It's Better If He's Worth It[/url]-->But It's Better If He's Worth It because in Despair & Lies I've experienced with words and used them like never before and took a risk, while in But It's Better If He's Worth It I think the story line has a lot of potential and flexibilty and it's one of my personal faves to write. It's a PANIC! story but it has some originality to it.

    And also, my OneShots are turning to a fave since I've headed to writing original fiction now and they just come along so naturally as soon as I take a hold of my pen. Much easier and diverse than fanfiction,The Rise And Fall Of Thy's OneShots Sin Blackened Hearts & Broken Angels[/url]-->The Rise And Fall Of Thy's OneShots Sin Blackened Hearts & Broken Angels
    September 30th, 2007 at 07:07pm
  • folie a dru.

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    Breakdown Alley: The Beginning of Nothing is my new favorite. I just love the AU of it and how original it is, but it's so . . . unlike my other stuff. And I love it.
    October 17th, 2007 at 08:53am
  • The Way

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    Not just my story, but I'm loving my character in Have Kids, Then We'll Talk. He pwns so much I let myself down when I can't write him like he (originally) was supposed to be.
    October 17th, 2007 at 03:35pm
  • fountainhead

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    Right now, it's Romance.
    Only two comments, though.
    October 24th, 2007 at 02:39am
  • Valium Freak

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    Right now it is This is just a punk rock song
    Because well I can't find anything wrong with it, and On my writing I alwyas do. It is simple, fast, furious and real. It is so real. So intense int he way I think it. I think in the real sense of it, it is a punk thing, and these days I can barely find punk things.
    It goes with the song "This is just a punkrock song" by bad religion

    Just read and judge
    October 27th, 2007 at 02:35pm
  • ALoserWithStyle

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    My Freard/Vamp fic is my favorite. I'm so proud of myself for how it's turning out. I've put in so many ideas and situations that are really new to me. Putting twists on Vampire cliches are so much fun to write. It's really hard to beleive I wrote it sometimes, blows me away. I also never get tierd of re-reading it. :tehe:
    October 27th, 2007 at 11:20pm
  • Siriano;

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    this story I started writing when I was eleven : Along the Blood River

    it evolved into my Four Cave stories. I also think i stuck to that plot more because I LOVED my Time Lord, Xander.
    October 28th, 2007 at 03:48am
  • oh amye.

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    stars is pretty much the only good thing i've ever written.
    October 28th, 2007 at 04:06am
  • Kill Tonksy

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    I quite like Blue Murder. It's such a thrill to be writing a horror story...
    October 28th, 2007 at 04:21am
  • Ash's Lizabeth

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    I love my oneshots, Nothing Can Heal Us.

    I never have any faith in my skill as an author, but some of the things people have said about that just made me think that maybe I'm not shitty, really.
    Plus, it's the first I've attempted with no story, so I can take it much slower, rather than rattle on through some storyline with predictable twists.
    October 28th, 2007 at 05:09am
  • space cadet glow.

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    I liked my Green Day story, I Am The Singer.
    I feel proud that my description didn't completely die after the third chapter. =D
    October 28th, 2007 at 06:11am
  • The Brightside

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    Tainted Love, my current newest Green Day fic, particularly my first chapter. I think lately I've been taking more care with the words I write down, rather than just immediately jotting it down and not thinking about it too much.

    Then there's the new GD fic I'm writing, but haven't posted up yet.
    October 28th, 2007 at 07:36am