Writing Tip: Show, Don't Tell - Comments

We just finished covering this in my creative writing class!

That's hard for me. I used to receive many story comments saying ''Show us, don't tell us''. I wonder if I have fixed that at all in my new stories.

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This is what my professor told me about my short story. I think I'm just used to rushing to things that I want to skip all the "boring" parts when in fact they could foreshadow something. I think it's about finding a balance.

This is something I've always worked hard at trying to do. In fact, this has actually helped me understand how to do a better job of that. It's hard sometimes, especially with dialogue. ><