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  • lumy.

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    We just finished covering this in my creative writing class!
    September 29th, 2013 at 06:01pm
  • Lady.V.

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    That's hard for me. I used to receive many story comments saying ''Show us, don't tell us''. I wonder if I have fixed that at all in my new stories.
    September 29th, 2013 at 06:00pm
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  • CharmedLuna

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    This is what my professor told me about my short story. I think I'm just used to rushing to things that I want to skip all the "boring" parts when in fact they could foreshadow something. I think it's about finding a balance.
    June 16th, 2013 at 07:51am
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    This is something I've always worked hard at trying to do. In fact, this has actually helped me understand how to do a better job of that. It's hard sometimes, especially with dialogue. ><
    June 16th, 2013 at 03:56am
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