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  • danceislife

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    It was definitely and aww moment but not an overly cliche one. I wasn't expecting that to be thrown in there, you know? Declaration of love is one thing, but mentioning that specifically? Good move ;)
    September 27th, 2009 at 11:52am
  • danceislife

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    Oh I didn't mean in the spin off. Just that he said babies. It was so cute! Ah. Perfect ending (in my opinion) because it ties back to the prequel.

    LOVE!!!
    September 27th, 2009 at 09:40am
  • Mindless Popsicle;

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    Ehh, no problem!
    You're great, btw.
    Thanks for the great story..and entertainment. :D
    September 25th, 2009 at 04:29pm
  • danceislife

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    I liked her. I thought she was kinda sweet. Felt AWFUL for her though.
    September 21st, 2009 at 06:42am
  • danceislife

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    OOO!!! I would be ALLL about a spin off story!!!

    I bet that would be a good one. No lie. You should seriously consider it.
    September 21st, 2009 at 06:16am
  • MieMonster;xo

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    oh sweet!
    well ill definitely be reading that!
    (:
    September 20th, 2009 at 12:03pm
  • MieMonster;xo

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    Your stories are absolutely amazing!!!!
    i havent read anything as captivating in a while.
    :)
    September 20th, 2009 at 08:30am
  • danceislife

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    Well! Let me know when you do. I like your writing style and would love to read more.
    September 16th, 2009 at 06:41am
  • danceislife

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    Him ignoring her would be a douche move. But it wouldn't be the first time he's done that. That also may have pushed things over the edge.

    Will you be starting something else once it's over?
    September 16th, 2009 at 12:52am
  • B e c c a

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    thanx for updating again!!!! your an awesome writer!
    September 15th, 2009 at 10:04pm
  • danceislife

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    Good. I would probably throw my computer across the room. No lie.

    You think I'm kidding don't you? Nope, I'm not.
    September 9th, 2009 at 09:57am
  • danceislife

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    She gonna get with Jack now? hehehe. It would be too cliche if she got with Matt...

    She needs a little something something though. And she better not have Alex's freaking baby or I will punch a wall. That's Cassie's baby, bitch!
    September 9th, 2009 at 09:42am
  • danceislife

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    Lovely update, as usual :)
    September 9th, 2009 at 09:30am
  • danceislife

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    I dunno. I'm picking out little things about their relationship that I kinda forgot about (I think I follow too many stories and forget what all has happened) and what works for them and what doesn't and stuff like that. I dunno. Maybe as a whole too. And MATT! I forgot about that whole part in the prequel.
    September 7th, 2009 at 10:59pm
  • danceislife

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    Also, I reread the entire thing last night. So much more is making sense now! I feel like I'm getting more out of it 2nd time around.
    September 7th, 2009 at 08:47pm
  • danceislife

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    I really don't see how it couldn't be fabulous. The rest of the story has been.
    September 7th, 2009 at 08:46pm
  • sylvia wrath

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    Huh. Maybe I just lack the ideas.
    September 7th, 2009 at 08:10am
  • danceislife

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    You better make it good then ;)
    September 7th, 2009 at 08:06am
  • sylvia wrath

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    Man, how do you get the momentum to update that quickly? I'll start a chapter and die out half way through.
    I'm like a really old car that's run out of gas. It's pathetic.
    September 7th, 2009 at 08:03am
  • sylvia wrath

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    Yeah, it just wouldn't go. However, I am a little curious as to what is going to happen next...
    September 7th, 2009 at 07:56am