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haha I'm so sorry, I should have explained in more detail. rp stands for role playing and basically what we do is we each pick a character, my character for example is Jimmy 'the rev' sullivan from A7X. Once you've picked a character you make a facebook profile page for them and you add all the other characters. Then once you've done that we add you to this little group called Yummy. From then on when you get on as your character you are that character. So you act as if you are them, interact with the other characters however you want and basically write a story that way. Right now there's me as Jimmy and I've made him a fallen angel. My friend Jayde is Synyster Gates who is also a fallen angel and best friends with Jimmy. My sister Kay is Jepha Howard and he is a hellhound, Syn is his master. Lastly there is our friend Nikola and she is Jared Leto who is a demi god. Sorry if I've only made this more confusing :3 let me know if there's anything else you'd like me to explain better or in more detail.

HI HI :3 So you like The Used, and I'm in love with your stories. So I have a ginormous favor to ask you. It's ok if you say no also :P you won't hurt my feelings. Anyways my friend and I started an rp thing about a year ago, and we did about 3 or 4 different stories I think with about 5 other girls. We all were characters from our favorite bands and it was super fun. Now my friend and I want to start a new one and we're working on finding some new recruits. I would love if you would join us :) pretty much any character is up for grabs except Jepha, Synyster Gates, and Jimmy Sullivan. Let me know if you want to join and I'll get you all set up :3

OMFG yes. :)
Thank you so much, you 90-year-old darling. ;D

You should update Set Apart This Dream please. Really miss it!!

Alright, sweet, cuz I'm havin' withdrawals it's that great a story :)
Thanks to reading that I got inspired again and managed to bang out two new chapters for Crash Into My Arms the other night ^_^
So thanks for that :D

I have one last chance to up my attendance next term, if I don't, they'll take me outta the system. So I definitely needa pull my head in...

Any updates for From The Beginning on the way? :)

Lolz okay... weird
I got an email saying you updated, but I looked and there's no new chapters XD

Yeah, I am rather disappointed in myself for my blatent... lazyness, slackness, just negative attitude towards going to school. It's a great school I'm in, an Adult School, free of the stupid bitchy drama that goes on in high school. I'm just fucking lazy is my problem. I keep saying "I'm gonna go, I'm gonna go" and then I wake up, grumble, and ignore my alarm -_-
The only one who can fix the problem is me, I know that. I hope at some point, I can pull myself out of the pathetic cycle.

A lot of my stories have been flagged for various reasons and been pending, but I've still been able to update. I say; Screw the editors, write your story YOUR WAY, and as none of my stories have been taken down, and some are even FINISHED with the "Awaiting editor's" blah blah whatever the fuck it is that it says, then I reckon you'd still be able to update if you wanted to :)

I'm considering reading Artwork, but I see it hasn't been updated since '09, and is unfinished. Dunno if I wanna read it unless you intend to finish it, I'm just like that :P
It's fine if you don't plan on updating, I'll just find something else to read :)

Haha, I'm not far over 5ft, I forget exactly how tall I am, I haven't been measured in forever XD
Just randomly, how old are you?
Your profile says 90 but I can't help but feel that's sarcasm :P

Naww, that would've hurt like a bitch, awesome that they came and apologized and loaded you up with free stuff though! :D

Umm, it's in the layouts bit, I figure you kinda know how to build layouts already judging by the one you have on your story, just put the link in the Story Title bit :)
I'm glad you love the banner, I worked on it for a good hour or so, probably switched the pic of Bert about four or five times before I just decided to use the same one you did, I hope the girl is okay too. Even though you have given us a mental image of her in the banner you already have, I kept imagining her as Lauren McKnight for some reason haha XD
You should definitely do character profiles though, it's probs my fave part about setting up new stories on here, getting to write out new bio's and search for picz for the characters and whatnot.
Though I usually do all that before I start writing :P

Well I got her name from an AFI song: Miseria Cantare: The Beginning so I doubt anyone else has named their character that :)
Miz does have a fair bit weighing her down, but I think it's just the right amount without being too much.

Well I can definitely say I wasn't disappointed by their performance when they came here. They were energetic and crazy, it was amazing. One of the best performances I have ever seen. It doesn't actually surprise me that Bert may have been off his face when you saw them, it IS Bert dude lolll

Yeah, you get assholes at every gig, the crowd at The Used were fucking dicks to me (I'm tiny) but, I was lucky enough to have someone lift me so I could see them heaps better. I was only about two rows away from the barrier with the best view above the crowd. I could've sworn Bert pointed over at me and smiled, but that could've just been my inner fangirl seeing things :)

Yeah, I've only used that kinda "Broken girl with abandonment issues" personality on Miseria in my MCR fic: Crash Into My Arms, there is probably still a little bit of the same aspect in Jackie in Under Jersey Skies with her Mum, but it doesn't drive the whole story. I like characters with a lot of depth, who've experienced real shit in their lives, not just some fangirl's mask while she writes out her daydreams.

Doesn't surprise me actually, 30STM actually do seem like those kinda people -_-

I've never met The Used either, but I did see them live, FINALLY, just recently, March 3rd, at Soundwave. One of the best fucking nights of my life. Unfortunately they didn't do signings in my town, I was hell bummed. It's one of my biggest dreams to meet them, I won't lie I do mostly just want to meet Bert, but the others are definitely worth meeting too :)

Haha, thanks, I'm modest about a lotta things, but not about how fucking sexy Chase is and how lucky I feel to call him mine :P
We've been together for just over a year and a half, as off Monday just gone :)

Fuck dude, I just love how perfectly you write Bert's character in that story, Quinn's too XD

Not to mention yours is about the only DECENT Bert McCracken story I have read on here. Some people on here just shouldn't post their stuff, or if they do, they complain when someone gives them constructive criticism. If I read a story and it's all "And then this happened, and she smiled, and he looked at her and smiled, and they held hands and laughed and talked blah blah blah I CAN'T WRITE I'M JUST FANGIRLING!" it shits me and I'm like ERGHHHH /Bashes X button to get away from it

No shit, The Used are fucking amazing, and 30 Seconds To Mars are overrated. To be honest, the only songs I'm really big on are The Kill and From Yesterday. The rest of their stuff doesn't really spark my interest. The Used however... I don't even have words for how incredible those guys are. I love that even after all these years, with all the fame and money they have gained, they are still grounded and stick to their morals. And they brought me and my partner together, and I love them for that. He actually looks a lot like Bert (there's photos of him on my Mibba if you wanna see for yourself)

So yeah :)

Awesome, that's great to hear!
I just randomly found you when I felt like reading a Bert McCracken fic yesterday in hype of The Used's Vulnerable album having just been released.

Fallen, is good, the girl is still fairly boyfriend-dependant like Bella, but not as pathetic. She is still strong on her own, and it is she that turns her back on the guy at times. The overall concept and storyline is brilliant. I'm not a religious person, Athiest in all honesty, but I do appreciate a good Heaven vs Hell storyline. Supernatural brought that on, I love that show haha. All in all, I would definitely recommend reading the books, for what Lauren lacks in making Luce less like Bella Swan she makes up for by being a better writer than Stephanie Meyer. :)

YOU, ARE A WICKED WRITER!
I just read the first chapter of From The Beginning, and I love your style
It's nice to know I'm not the only one on here with decent writing skills, and not the only one who knows how to structure a story right, and understands the concept of character building.
I'm going to continue reading now, I just thought you should know how great your writing is :)

Thank so much for the comment on 'My Constant Companion'. I'm so happy you're in love with it as much as I am.
I should be updating soon.

No problem! I totally understand that! It makes it so much more intense. Haha! And omg, THANK YOU! That just made me so happy! I can't wait to read them!<3

You're welcome!
Your story really is a highlight in my days! :D

No problem. :) I didn't see the problem anymore. :D