TomTom! / Comments

OMG! You like soccer! (football, lol :D) That's so COOL!

hey i'm Kristen I really like your poems =]

xD
Well that's good!
And I'm just wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice to meeeeet you too!

I like saying bye at the end of my comments.
It is a good song. Listen to it.
We have the same icon because of Dante. He is my hatgodchild. And they are the hatparents and hatgodparents.

Dont worry about it lol some of my poems are hard to understand and its just a spur of the moment thing x

awwww thank you and you are super good as well xx

the bit that was meant to reflect that was "I think I'm good enough;not just some stupid little girl"

No I kow what you are saying I just thought that if you realise you are good enough you can help other people realise they're good enough too xx

Yeah that poem that you didnt understand is about using a personal experience of not being considered to be good enough and hweping other people to realise that you should always follow your dreams. But thanks for the comment x

Well, Thanks.
I think.
...
I have a song stuck in my head.

Here goes.

Baby
What are you doing today
what are you doing later
I don’t know my way through a maze of gray skyscrapers
But I’m willing to learn

If you want me to I’ll stay just where I am
But I promise just to follow when I land
And you can take my word for that

You are my Manhattan from the sky
You look so neat and tidy when I’m way up high,
But I know your streets are lined with a fine mess inside
And I wanna come down and walk around your mind.

Daises
Once upon an old daydream, that’s what you gave me
Out on the corner of Broadway and 48th street, on a rainy afternoon
(Well) I could start discovering your world
And I would make a damn good city girl
Things would start to bloom, I’m sure

You are my Manhattan from the sky
You look so neat and tidy when I’m way up high,
But I know your streets are lined with a fine mess inside
And I wanna come down and walk around your mind.

I know you want me to see don’t lie to me
Why you gotta go be so shy to me?
I ain’t buying the false anxiety let your fortress fall
What’s it gonna take to get you there?
If fear was money you’d be a millionaire
Or all alone in a leather swivel chair counting stacks of gold
Oh oh
You are my Manhattan from the sky
You look so neat and tidy when I’m way up high,
But I know your streets are lined with a fine mess inside
And I wanna come down and walk around ohhh

You are my Manhattan from the sky
You look so neat and tidy when I’m way up high,
But I know your streets are lined with a fine mess inside
And I wanna come down and walk around your mind.
Oh ohh ohh oh

It's a good song.
I like it.

I don't know what else to say right nows..
So, byes.

Yes, Marisa likes to use the third person and thanks you for the poem comment x

Go for it lol...Marisa loves feedback x

Dont worry about it. I havent been up to much, just wrote a few new poems and been around town and that x

Hello!
I'm Lindsay!
How are you on this oh so b-e-a-utiful day/evening?

Hallo.
How are you?
I'm swell.
Thanks for asking.
One of your friends commented me saying she liked my comments to you.
>_<
They really aren't that great.
Just LONG.
And kind of funny.
At times.
But not really.
....
I forgot where I was going with that.
>.>
Eh?
It happens right?
Don't answer that.
I'm bored.
Like SUPER BORED!!!
This isn't helping either.
Just making me look stupid.
I'm totally going to shut up now.
BYES!

Hey how are you today?
What have you been up to? :)

awww...thanks =) nothing is too corny for me...i think thats one of the nicest things anybody ever said to me...especially online so thanks!

Nice to meet you, too, Tom!
I'm good, thanks.
How are you?

Haha so do I. And yeah I don't mind the lol so much. It gets the point across I guess. I admit I even use it sometimes. But shhhh ;]

Its a secret :D

I promise that if I see a way that you can improve I will say it x