So if you're getting this comment it's because you commented on [b]Your Name Remains the Same, All That's Changed Is This Pretty Face[/b] and thought it was pretty bomb diggity. And the reason I am contacting you is because I stayed away from TH fiction for a long, long time, and I'm testing the waters for the first time in a year by attempting a new Bill story named [b]Paved Paradise[/b]. You're free to check it out or ignore it. I just figured you might like to know. And I've gotten much better at writing. ;]
The vines are scary and lead to this giant plant thingy. O_O There are many of them scattered about the forest. They track you down, drag you away, and eat you. Lucifer placed other nasties in the forest, as well. D: Meant to be completely horrifying. Not many people survive in the forest, unless they know how to. Which means that Jane is extremely lucky.
It was slightly offensive when comparing with the maze from Harry Potter, but it's perfectly okay. :) I thought it was awesome that someone finally recognized whom Lucifer was mostly based off of. So, I thank you. :3 And I hope you continue to love the story.
Lucifer's looks where slightly based off of Ciel from Kuroshitsuji. But I spiked his hair, made him slightly older and cold, changed his personality a little. Behind the eye-patch is a hole; there is no purple eye. XP And with the maze... It's not quite like one from Harry Potter; as it's just this huge forest. It's not quite a maze at all, actually. Lucifer just called it that. o_o Tossed in a bunch of nasties, too.
First of all I want to say thank you for your HONESTY! I can not tell you how many people lie just to make someone feel good. After reading your comment I re-read my story and realized you were right, and its very confusing to keep up with. Anyways after you listening to me ramble about this, I wanted to say that I will probaly redo my story. Thanks for the honest comment!
Thank you so much for your comment on "Story of a Girl," Hon. It makes me extremely happy that you like it, and even more so that you took the time to comment. And I have gotten comments this month. My last one was just yesterday, actually. Maybe you looked at it wrong? I'll be updating sometime in the next week. :)
-Savannah
http://stories.mibba.com/read/425214/Paved-Paradise/