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  • Gjhgs

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    Thank you so much for the comment. You words are very encouraging and I'm glad you like it :)
    June 12th, 2012 at 06:09am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Oh good, I'm glad you're not bothered by. I hate to ramble and then have someone be rude about it. I completely agree; I hate how we use to be so social, especially when talking about writing and now look at us? We're never talking. However, I think this Comment Swap thing is going to completely change things around for some people. I think this is going to encourage us to talk more, especially about our stories. I think it'll be the same with our blogs too.

    Thank you, I really do appreciate any help you can offer. I don't know how many times I'll be saying thank you to you but still. (:
    June 8th, 2012 at 04:10am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Yes, please. I will take any help I can get. I've mentioned it to a few other people who commented on my story (or just 1, I can't remember) and I've mentioned it in my author's notes that I'd love any help with spelling errors and stuff like that. A lot of the editing in there came from the commenter before you. She helped me out quite a bit. She helped me with separating my chapters in a better way. So technically, she really helped with my story structure. And... I'm rambling about stuff you probably don't care about. But really, if you see something, feel free to point it out whether you message me or comment on the story. Preferably, message but it's entirely up to you.

    Yay, I'm glad you're hooked! I've never heard that from a reader. I like hearing these nice things. It makes me feel all nice inside. If you feel like you sound like a fangirl, don't worry. I sound like that too sometimes (don't we all?) and I don't mind. Even if you do sound like one, it's flattering. (:

    Again, thank you so much. I might add the next chapter this weekend but after that, it'll have to wait until my exams are done. Also, I'm glad you read the blog updates because if one person reads them then there's a point for me putting them there & showing them on the summary page so people can find it if somethings' changed. That way it saves me from posting it in the author's note.
    June 8th, 2012 at 03:23am
  • morshu101

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    Any time
    June 8th, 2012 at 02:44am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    I'm afraid the length happen to scare everybody; it evens scares me sometimes. I literally almost never have enough energy to go through the entire thing to find any mistakes in it.

    To be honest, your comment is one of the best ones I've ever gotten on this story. I'm really glad you enjoyed it and I'm glad you would like more because guess what? I'm currently working on the next chapter. I'm also quite glad that I managed to get you into Greek mythology or the bit that I have in my story. I imagine that's what my one of my favorite authors feels like when people tell him that he's the reason they're into Greek mythology now. Or something along those lines. I'm very glad you decided to read my story; I hope it was worth your while.

    However, you might want to re-read the prologue because I just edited it with some crucial information that may not stick out much until you read the next chapter, if you're truly interested in reading the rest. I also changed her name to Cordelia, so I don't want you to be confused if you read the next chapter once it's posted.

    Thank you so much for the recommendation by the way. It means a lot to me. Thank you for your comment, and I hope you'll tell me what you think of the updated version of the prologue & maybe the next chapters. (:
    June 8th, 2012 at 02:34am
  • n. josten

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    Oh no, you didn't. Not at all. I really appreciated knowing the proper way so I can edit over it. (:
    Again, thank you.
    June 6th, 2012 at 10:11pm
  • n. josten

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    Heh. Thank you for the story comment.
    In reply to your cigarette comment, yeeeah. I knew something was wrong with that because the smokers around me constantly call them one or the other and I had no idea which was proper. Thank you, though.
    June 6th, 2012 at 10:00pm
  • tendo choi

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    It's fine. XD I'm back from Edinburgh now!
    July 16th, 2010 at 11:13pm
  • tiggledpinkis

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    No problem :)
    July 10th, 2010 at 10:16pm
  • tendo choi

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    John reminds me so much of the guy from the IT Crowd in the picture on your profile. XD
    You've stopped being online as much as I am! :(
    July 8th, 2010 at 11:59pm
  • h----

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    it's okay
    its a good story :)
    July 5th, 2010 at 12:35pm
  • Cold Wind

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    SOOO...what's up avec toi?
    June 18th, 2010 at 02:01am
  • MasticatedCake

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    you iz mai slammin' hawtie. (:

    lav yous!
    June 7th, 2010 at 10:53pm
  • Cold Wind

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    Ah...

    I...er...I just got my hair bleached?

    Ahahaha...I'm boring.

    BUT YES...nice to talk to you.

    I'm sorry I've been MIA for so long...you're definitely one of the more awesome people on here.
    May 31st, 2010 at 06:24pm
  • Fun Ghoul.

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    Your not much of a talker.
    May 23rd, 2010 at 12:34am
  • Fun Ghoul.

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    Nothing much. You?
    May 20th, 2010 at 07:45pm
  • Fun Ghoul.

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    Hello. ^_^ I'm Danae.
    What's goin' on?
    May 19th, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • tendo choi

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    http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/156792/

    You should join. :)
    May 17th, 2010 at 01:26am
  • Cold Wind

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    OMIGOSH...I have not been on here in FOREVER.

    Basically...I've been super busy.

    Okay, so....

    BOYFRIEND? YAAY.

    WHAT'S UP????
    May 16th, 2010 at 01:58am
  • AsylumSpirit

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    hey im nina
    April 5th, 2010 at 01:03am