Hey! Thanks for the comment. Not many people give helpful critiques so I appreciate it! I noticed the repetitiveness too after I'd reread a few chapters. Gosh... practically everytime Lucas talked, I mentioned his smile. lol... this has been a relaxing sort of unedited writing, so it's far from perfect. It's nice to just write without analyzing... basically it's my therapy lol. Thanks for reading!!
Thank you so much for the amazing comment.
It means the world to me.
It makes me feel awesome that you said you could almost feel what I felt, because that's what I was trying to do...
words can't explain- but thank you :)
I'll go check it out again. x3