Lady of the Moon / Comments

I don't know if it is how i write or my lack of creativity. Would you read my story "Even i can't face this" and tell me what i need to improve? I feel like it is horribly written!

Yeah!!!!! Thank you Moon Lady!!!
I wish you would update more than once a week but at least I get long chapters!
<3
I'm not a good writer. Can I have some of your talent?

Tell me Lady! Tell me! Does she accept?!?!

Hello my Lady,
DON'T SPLIT SARAH AND DAMIEN!!!!!
Are you crazy?
And what about Eric's proposal?
What about Audrey going with Ezra?
What do you think you're doing if you split them up?
Damien would be broken!
Unless you turned him into a jerk!
OMG! you have me doing flips around the house1
Update soon : )

Passionate Obsession. It is so beautifully written.

Congratulations on the Mibbian of the Week! I only jus saw it now. =] you so deserve it. You're kind and awesome and and amazing.

Tomorrow! Yeah!!!!! <3
I have been waiting!

No problem! You truly are a great writer. c:

Yeah Lady! Gay smut in the next two chapters.
That chapter waas beautifully written.
And ew. Eleanor.
Ian was so kind and gentle.
I LOVE this story.
Update it soon and your other one.
Two more days right?
GAY! GAY! GAY IS THE WAY! (or straight. It doesn't matter).
<3

You really have a great talent in writing continu what u do u do it very well congrats and update soon in all of your stories don't keep us all waiting :)

Congrats on getting 'Mibbian of the Week'!! I was wondering when your name would pop up :D

Same here , and I happen to be finding inspiration from one of your stories (: your writing is fantastic .

No : ( I wanted them to be reunited forever.
but it is okay because Tristan is an amazing master. So yes it was and it wasn't. She can't have two masters?
I know that is stupid but...okay :) Thank you!!!

YESSSS!!!!!! Please.

Should i know? Would it spoil the whole story? What do you think? It is up to YOU! I want to know! Who am I kidding?

Thanks for accepting it :-)

Yay! I just wish I knew what happened to Ashton!

2 days? I think I can handle that : )
I cannot wait.
And congrats on getting Mibbian of the week!!

Thank you for accepting. (:

She will know whose the doll is, but not anytime soon. Its by like, at the end of the book.

And yes, spooky, I know.

Thank you! :) I actually wanted to be very descriptive.