we don't have a name, still working on that too.
haha.
we also don't have a myspace or facebook, we're not going to make one until we're absolutely sure we want to go through with it.
Oh god, totally disregard that then. I had a complete brain lapse and thought you were the author of another William Becket story that I follow that has a lot of completely random/insane twists in it. Sooo, in other words, a lot of that feedback/comment does not apply xD I do think, like you said, building up Will a little more wouldn't be a bad idea though.
But, now that I know which story you do like - and that I love, I still hold fast to my belief that you prob. have one of the most original/believable settings of all the rest and that's really tough to achieve.
Sorry for being retarded and sending you an irrelevant and long response earlier.