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man, i don't know. i was laying in bed about to go to sleep and then i'm all like "i wanna get on mibba and read something of Miranda's" seriously...

this is kinda creepy omfg...how do i know this...

...a story?
cause no lie, i got on just now to go through your stories omfg...
DON'T ASK WHY I JUST SUDDENLY WANT TO AT 12:30 IN THE MORNING RANDOMLY
IT'S A SIGN OMG. I KNOW THESE THINGS

Yo. wat up.

Sometimes you gotta ask for feedback, and maybe you'll get it. Most people don't make any retorts to for critique because exactly that; hurting someone's feelings. Or maybe read your writing like your a reader, how would you improve it? I'm sorry if I don't make any sense, I'm not good at explaining things ._. (And it shows in my writing LOL.)
:)

As a writer who constantly gets slumped in a chapter, loses inspiration and suffers from writer's block hardcore, I try to get criticism from friends but I take their ideas, but I don't know, it's not the same because they don't actually write and don't go into depth as to what exactly needs to be worked on. I don't take criticism personally, it just gives me options on what I should improve on. Thanks sweetie xoxox

Thank you for the awesome feedback! Seriously, that's what I needed :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it then. It was very cliche though, I have to admit.

Thanks for commenting on my entry for your contest ^.^ I'll keep everything you said in mind :)

i think everyone would be

and sadly, no one's figured that out yet
or teleportation
i would be all over teleportation...

lies! you are awesome Miranda...and you are a really good friend :)
and that's just it, it was an accident. not like you purposefully did it or anything

well that's sad :(

surely she can understand that?

well she'll get over it. she can't be mad about that forever. just be sure to go to her next piano recital...

but Gabe like promised! he must have a party...

if that's the case i don't see why she's so mad at you

the whole thing with your mom calling you a bitch and whatnot and going around telling the neighbors and telling you you have a half brother and saying she was going to kick you out...

i can kind of understand being mad about that, but it's not like it's the end of the world and it's the worst thing ever. things happen. and i'm sure she'll have another piano recital...

i'm sorry about all that :( i kind of hope it's not the end of the world, but if it is Gabe better still be having that party. or Alex. someone better have a party or Danielle is highly disappointed.

well that's better than it breaking. at least it was easy to fix.

in case you haven't seen it on facebook, i'm crying now omg. i never cry.

side note, IT FUCKING STARTED SNOWING ON MY BIRTHDAY XD it is snowing right now.

we're pushing three years. in May it's three years...two years and eight months? yes, i am your memory and i'm amazing at it. you're one of my bestest friends Ran Ran, i love you so much omg. and well, i just am a good listener. and now you do have me, and i'm always here for you and you know how to get me if you need me.

we do need to talk more. i'm lazy too so it's not just you. but that shouldn't really be an excuse. we're bad. i'm sorry to hear about your dog and cat :( Allison hates you? what happened?

it's fine, i can wait. i've waited this long already. i'm patient at times lol.

how'd it break? it kind of was a thin wire, the first one was thicker but it was a pain in the ass at the end there so i just used a thinner one. selfish on my part i know, i'm sorry. i'm still glad you love it. and that it fits. jeez Allison is serious you have a baby wrist lol. oh, i do have a webcam now so i don't have to steal my mom's laptop, yay.

i love you too. oh dear god i'm tearing up again. i am having a good birthday :) oh please have a good day too, i mean come on, last year on our two year...that was sad...

same. just laying in bed doing a whole lot of nothing...

booface?
WHAT'S UP?!