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  • eyesofophelia

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    Gah! You must update Girls' School immediately! I love it!
    February 5th, 2012 at 09:53am
  • KMRuvalcaba

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    Holy mother of god, thank you so much for your wonderful comment!! The fact that you felt that way...ugh! I love it!! Thank you so so so so much for that!!!! The next chapter is a bit more then half way written and should be up later tonight or early tomorrow morning!!! I do have two previews up on my tumblr for you to check out: http://kmruvalcaba.tumblr.com/

    Thank you again so so much for that comment! You have no idea what they mean to me!!

    -Kassandra
    November 1st, 2011 at 01:09am
  • kissaevansto

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    Love it Love it!!!! please keeep going! :D
    August 29th, 2011 at 06:25am
  • AtomicIero

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    ahhh thats cool :]
    I'll look forward to it :D
    xx
    February 3rd, 2011 at 06:20pm
  • AtomicIero

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    I stayed up all last night reading Girls School, OMG, I Love It :] Update Soon?

    xxx
    February 3rd, 2011 at 05:51pm
  • MissForbidden

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    Wow. I can't believe you said that. I am honored you enjoy my writing that much.

    It's a lot of trial and error. I have just read a lot of good and bad stories on mibba and before that quizilla.

    What I got while reading and writing is that I have to write what I feel and know. I write as if I were in the situation where wordyness and too much description do not exist unless needed, I use the thesaurus a lot to find words that better describe what I want and I have gotten to the point where the words I would search for just come to me. I edit a whole bunch until it flows off the tongue.

    I am an aspiring teacher and writer, and all I can say is read a lot and that will form and shape your writing whether it's online or in books.

    I loved Stephanie Meyers depth with emotion and connection, yet hate her character development and plot. I love JK rowling for painting a world so far from mine yet I feel like I am sitting in it.

    I hope this helps! If you want to talk directly please email me via missforbidden@hotmail.com :)
    January 5th, 2011 at 07:31am
  • KT4HIMx

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    Well it's a beautiful story :]

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    -Katie
    January 1st, 2011 at 05:13pm
  • Raven616

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    I'm going to update Pure Morning this weekend... I hope it helps you to get inspired ")... really missing your stories but I understand...I don't have time to write more either. I hope you did write more but didn't had time to update it LOLOL sorry I can't wait to read more honestly... Good luck
    December 15th, 2010 at 07:26pm
  • Raven616

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    just letting you know that there are still someone who would love to see update. ")
    December 13th, 2010 at 09:37pm
  • Raven616

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    I miss your stories...:(
    November 25th, 2010 at 08:06pm
  • Raven616

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    just letting you know...I won't be posting any stories to mibba...at least now. Cause people are not nice anymore. I've been reported and also in my entry about this problem some people complained... they think I should not post a story with a horrible grammer. So sorry for my stupid stories...
    November 4th, 2010 at 08:05pm
  • Raven616

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    I hope you will be okay again... I really really really miss reading your stuff. I think maybe there is no news of HIM again...could be the cause too. Let's hope for a bunch of new pics and interviews :)

    Good luck...
    November 1st, 2010 at 08:45pm
  • Raven616

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    where are you??? you are the one of those BEST fanfiction writer...and so sad to see none updates.....
    October 27th, 2010 at 10:21pm
  • Raven616

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    wow you didn't update anything since Aug and the Girl's school since June... I miss you stories. PLease don't be those writers who stops with sending their stories....
    October 2nd, 2010 at 10:26pm
  • Raven616

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    good news...it's working now...and another good news... I really wanna be done with DSL...so I'm gonna sit on my ass this weekend and type some more chapters. Plus I sent my beta another chapter.... ")
    August 28th, 2010 at 04:26pm
  • VampireVenus

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    I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much for commenting! I'll try to have it up sooner, but sometimes things happpen that interere (like the cold I recently developed) so that's why I say a week. If all goes well, I'll have it up sooner. :D
    August 28th, 2010 at 09:42am
  • Raven616

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    what's happening with Mibba?? is so weird but when you type Ville Valo...for searching story...is no result....WTF...do you also feel that mibba is getting a little weird?
    August 26th, 2010 at 07:57pm
  • Kit_Kat_KiTtY69

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    lol ok :)
    August 21st, 2010 at 10:39pm
  • Raven616

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    Man...I know you'll take atleast a month to update a chapter ...:) So I think I should check the last chapter..
    August 14th, 2010 at 09:40pm
  • Raven616

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    Soon... I don't have time to write more when I'm so busy you know and to torture you...I'm not gonna send the last chapter of PM untill I read couple of yours I'm for you ^_^
    August 12th, 2010 at 07:38pm