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  • Criala

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    Winners for my Pick A Quote contest have been posted :) I'm sorry ti took so long.
    April 19th, 2011 at 09:01pm
  • Popular.

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    I'm gonna check it out =)

    I'm currently in 3 different contests, so I gotta see if I'll have time to join ^.^
    April 15th, 2011 at 10:59am
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    The story is about two guys named Hayden and Haley who were in a relationship that everyone disapproved.
    What I had in mind when I wrote the story was that they were twins whose parents were divorced. They met for the first time when they were teens, and they fell in love, not feeling like they were brothers since they didn't grow up together.
    Now, this isn't explicit in the story, so they might as well be unrelated and only looking alike, and people disapproved their relationship just because of homophobia.

    Anyway, their words of hate hurt Hayden to the point he started to think he was a monster for loving a guy he shouldn't love, and he was scared to look in the mirror because he thought his reflect would show the monster he was inside.
    Haley was stronger, he didn't care about what people said, and he always protected Hayden. That's why Hayden thought Haley was his hero.

    Eventually, things got worse for Hayden. In the story, he is in a mental hospital and Haley is visiting him. Haley is actually the only one talking except for the part when Hayden calls him Hero. The rest of the time, he is talking to Haley on his mind, remembering the time they were together from the casual sentences Haley says.

    The main point in the story is that Hayden is living in the past. He tries to convince himself things haven't changed between he and Haley. But it is becoming more difficult at every visit, and, deep inside, he starts to hate Haley for going on with his life and leaving him behind. He can't live without Haley, and he wants to believe Haley can't live without him.

    This is the second reason he is scared of mirrors - as it is explained at the end of the story. Hayden doesn't want to look in the mirror because he would see Haley is no better than him, just a man and not the hero he worshipped. It would achieve to destroy his dream by proving him he has been living a lie.

    - I hope this is clear enough. The story seems clear to me because I wrote it, but I realize it's actually very complicated to explain x)
    April 15th, 2011 at 01:20am
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    Thank you for the comment on Hero. Of course, I can explain you. Which part don't you understand ? ^.^
    April 14th, 2011 at 09:36pm
  • Seretti

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    Hey there :) Don't mind Aramis, he's retarded and likes to confuse people (especially me) :P Anyway, there is no truth to his story. It was all created in that sick little mind of his :D
    April 13th, 2011 at 10:01pm
  • Aramis

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    Thank you for the story comment. Whether there is any truth to my story or not, will remain a secret. ;)
    April 13th, 2011 at 08:26pm
  • Kawaii Emotions;

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    You don't have to change it, it didn't count for much. Yeah the part were she killed herself and kinda the homophobic thing, just because my friend makes a big deal of homphobes wanting her dead, when I myself think it's calmed down a bit.
    April 7th, 2011 at 06:38pm
  • MirrorRain

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    Letting you know that you have been added to my Take a Picture, Write a Quote contest. Have fun writing! :)
    March 31st, 2011 at 01:08pm
  • Mr Reckless.

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    Hey!
    Just a quick reminder that you've now got just under a month to get your entry into me for my Post Secret one-shot challenge!
    <3 x
    March 4th, 2011 at 05:14pm
  • Raeyl

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    Your stories are advertised and thank you for having my entry win third!
    February 5th, 2011 at 04:02am
  • Raeyl

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    They will be on my profile once I am on my comp!!
    February 4th, 2011 at 12:01am
  • Raeyl

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    http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/post/9079866/#9079866 ---> forgot to tell you what contest lol
    February 2nd, 2011 at 09:05am
  • Raeyl

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    2nd PLACE!!!! Good job!! What three stories do you want advertised on my profile?
    February 2nd, 2011 at 09:04am
  • Raeyl

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    You have until the 5th to get your entry in ---->http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/post/9221080/#9221080
    February 1st, 2011 at 06:16am
  • xxluverofvampiresxx

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    http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/post/9189501/#9189501 join this contest please? I don't want her to cancel it
    January 25th, 2011 at 11:42pm
  • Raeyl

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    Remember the deadline is the 25th
    (http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/163854/)
    January 23rd, 2011 at 12:40pm
  • FluffyGoldFish

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    Thanks for the reminder!
    January 17th, 2011 at 04:09am
  • The Door Knobs Bite

    The Door Knobs Bite (100)

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    I know. Thanks for the reminder anyway.
    :)
    January 15th, 2011 at 06:25pm
  • so it goes

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    okay, thanks(: I'll get it out as soon as I can
    January 15th, 2011 at 05:07pm
  • Raeyl

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    Wat #s 4 100 themes?
    January 13th, 2011 at 06:38am