Oh hey.(: What I mean is that instead of using so many italics, bolds, and special effects, you could make it a little more simple by taking all that out and writing the summary in paragraphs instead of pressing"enter" so many times.
Also, you guys should try and make a layout. I make layouts for my story that "fit" the story. What I mean is, if I'm writing a Ronnie Radke story, I use a banner of Ronnie Radke and a colored background that matches the picture. (Look at a couple of my Ronnie stories if you don't know what I'm talking about).
Uhm, this is just a suggestion, but I've made a layout for someone else on Mibba before (if you guys don't want to do it.) She picked out the picture and I just made a layout based around it. She added me as an author for a couple days so I could put the layout on her story. That's just a suggestion, but if you're interested, I'd love to do that for you. (:
I'm sorry about leaving it there, but if I hadn't, the chapter would have been super long! But nothing happens, he comes and saves her... I'll get more up as soon as I can.
J'aime poisson rouge. J'ai deux chats. T'aime musique? Moi? Oui, beaucoup. Je n'aime pas les sports.
^I like goldfish. I have two cats. You like music? Me? Yes, very much. I do not like sports.
Oui, oui. J'adore les poissons rouges. J'adore la musique! C'est ma vie. Aussi, je t'adore tres beaucoup, mon amie! <3
^I can go for days. French 3 for the win, bro.
Thank you doll, I'm glad that you liked it. I am sorry for taking so long to get more out, but I had a long weekend... so, I promise to get more out soon.
I feel lucky that I have you as a commenter regardless, but to know that you don't comment on a regular basis just makes me feel even more special. So thank you so much for taking the time to comment for my story!
Well I'm glad that seeing the 3 chapters waiting for you made you happy! [[I'm also happy that you enjoyed it too]] I promise to get another one out soon, probably tomorrow =D
Aw, thank you hun, I appreciate it. Yeah, I try to keep updates coming regularly, unless I'm on pause with a story, otherwise people will just get frustrated and quite reading...
Oh wow, seriously? Ok, the fact that is even possible for me to do is completely insane! Wow, now I feel like I can actually write!
[[laughs]] Ok, on a serious note, I'm super stoked that you're enjoying the story and that you found it interesting enough to read past the first chapter! So thank you for that! And I will update again soon, promise.
It's not erased, it's saved on my computer. You don't get on here and we never really talk anymore so I haven't gotten the chance to ask you to write a new on. Alright, I'll read it. D:
Hey! How've you been?!
Haha, you're welcome. I already love the story, so I HAVE to comment! lol
Meh, no worries. I'm terrible at updating too... =\
I will definitely go bug her. >=D