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  • Katrina ;

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    Thanks so much for the story comment!!
    A lot of people seem to want to know what is going to happen, I will have to make it good!
    =D
    October 17th, 2010 at 10:39pm
  • pinkstreakz

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    It's ok :) I love your story though ^.^
    October 6th, 2010 at 03:52pm
  • pinkstreakz

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    I didn't mean it to be offensive (sorry if it came across that way) but I just meant that there were seven paragraphs in the beginning which weren't set in the present, and it gets a bit boring (not in a rude way!). I thought you could maybe mix the big paragraphs up in the story, or whenever she does something for example:
    'Hello Bob,' Abbie said. Bob gave her a smile and a nod, like he always did. Bob had a quiet personality, but he could be cheeky if he wanted to. Like in High School, Abbie remembered Bob's status as School Prankster...

    Yeah, I kinda rambled, but you get my drift... Instead of having a huuge block of it, split it up :)
    October 6th, 2010 at 08:26am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    gotcha :)
    October 5th, 2010 at 06:54am
  • the-quiet-one

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    Haha :)
    October 4th, 2010 at 11:24pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    you are welcome :)

    and my comment wasn't harsh or anything? Because that wasn't what I was going for if it was....
    October 4th, 2010 at 10:46pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Haha, good to know.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 10:48pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Hehe, alright. I might ocnsider it, but I don't know yet :)
    October 3rd, 2010 at 10:19pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Eh, I would be way to lazy to check these things everyday. I'm already too lazy to check my e-mails everyday.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 09:48pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    I never really considered having one. I don'T have facebook, twitter or anything of that either.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 09:41pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    No, I don't have it. My friend just asked me that a few days ago.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 06:22pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Haha :)
    October 3rd, 2010 at 04:18pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Haha, lol, probably.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 02:59pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Yeah, absolutely. And they are also the only Europeans who drive on that side of the road. They are comepletely weird.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 02:08pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Haha, oh well. The only problem i had with living in England would be adjusting to the driving on the left side of the street.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 01:15pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Haha, yeah probably
    October 2nd, 2010 at 11:47pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Yeah, I just really have the feeling that from England moving to America is easier. Or maybe we just imagine that, but it seems that way :)
    October 2nd, 2010 at 10:23pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    It definitley is possible. And it would definitley totally worth it. Maybe first living in England and then later in USA. I don't know why but i have the feeling that getting from England to the USA seems easier to me.
    October 2nd, 2010 at 09:27pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Yeah. I mean England is at least on the same continent. But with America being so damn strict with immigration. You won't be able to live there without a visum. And getting such a visum isn't easy at all. The only chance I'd be able to get to America is with a Green Card, but getting one of them is a slim chance.
    October 2nd, 2010 at 06:13pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Yeah definitley. The only problem is just getting over there. I think England would be a bit easier than America though.
    October 2nd, 2010 at 03:20pm
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