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ANDRON! (: i wonder how much you come on here..

I havent seen you in forever.

How you been Boyyyyyy?

xxxxx

HEY! Who stole my Story?

The Fall of Destiny Series Short Stories is gone?

Pankibi, thank you for correcting me on my grammer with my title. i will admit i suck (X1million) at grammer itself and wasnt to shure on how to spell it. i kno thats sorta retarded but, whatever. i hope u dont mind i called you Pankibi. i dont want to get yelled at again.

Oh. I thought I should just point out that in the title to your "The Fall of Destiny Series", you spelled destiny 'desitny'
^-^;;

I would have done it that way, but since it's a story title I didn't want to make the title into two sentences... But thank you for your opinion! :)

LolZ! Thank you!
Some explains whats going on in my life 'nd Song of the day, blah blah blah!
Some explains who I am.
The third part is just Fun-Stuff(s)!!!!

Hey! Since you have a good understanding of when to use semi-colons, I wanted to know if I was using it right in this story title.
You Told Me This Gets Harder; Well it Did
I would really appreciate that, acutally. :)

Hello. I'm Oli.

Heya! I'm Kristen! Call me Kris.
SO...waz up?!

new chapter!!

yea... i've been working on the song, and i cant really get anyting to stick, so i'll have to work on it more..

Hey! Just thought I'd pollute your comments with my presence.

~pollutes~

thank you, and i noticed that they are short.... they seem so much longer on paper.... if you have any ideas that might help, i'll glad ly accept them, and if you have a song idea, send it to me... dont have time to read stories to night, but maybe tomorrow, thanks again
J

can you do me a favor... rad my stoties.... im a freind of marisa's

Lol thank you again, your editing is impressive
And I think you broke the record for the longest comment ever so congratulations lol :P
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um....I don't really know what to say to that
I have no idea how you picked out all of those mistakes but wow.
Thank you for pointing me in the right direction and I appreciate the advice on how to make my story better.
And don't worry about offending me, I'm not one of those people who can't take constructive criticism, I like advice.
I will definitely bear all of this in mind and I'll have another look at this chapter when I have more time and make some improvements
And I haven't forgotten about reading your story, I've just been really busy today. But I promise that I will read it.
Thanks again
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No your profile, your about section, I should have made myself clearer.
Its just really cool.....

South Wales, By the way I love your intro...
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haha no problem.
and sure i'll have a look at them when i've got time.
i'm currently at school xD

ADRON!! (: haha. i love your profile mannn. ahah.

thanks for the addddd.

i can seee you from the other side of the roooom. all concentraty and stuff.

i wonder if thats my story your reading? lol.

i hope not..... CRITICISM!!

xxx