Thank you for the story comment! I understand your confusion on how the guidance counselor found out, but usually in the case of teenage pregnancies, the parents will call the school up and inform the staff. Or at least that's what happened to a classmate of mine when her parents found out she was pregnant. Sorry for the confusion x:
@ charlie like whoaaa I'm glad you found my comment helpful. :) I always try to give the sort feedback I'd like if that makes sense! And yes, I didn't think I'd like it but I really did. I see you've updated so I'll go see what's happening as I'd quite like to see how this ends! Haha
hiya! just wanted to thank you for your lovely, in depth comment on 'don't wave no goodbye'. it was really wonderful to get some proper honest feedback and see my story from a different perspective, so thank you! your constructive criticism has given me a lot to think about to improve my story and i'm really glad that even though the story subject wasn't your scene, you were still able to enjoy it. so cheers! xx
Thank you so much for that comment, it was wonderful!
And yeah, I know what you mean about not being consistent with my "-isms." I'll change it from the word mall! Lol since I'm not from there, I have to do research on what words they use from different things; it's a difficult task to write a story that takes place in a different region! Sometimes I forget which one I'm writing about XD
But I'll do my best to make it consistent, thank you so much!!
@ AngelBlue Umm.. I'm not sure, as it's for a 7 round contest, but if you subscribe to Standing Tall, you'll get an email when the installment, the sequel, is posted
doin good, doin good, just keepin a new site up and maintained. It's to the Guardian story posted here. It's got total detail from pictures, maps, descriptions, and a revised version of the first. If you wanna check it out, coolio. otherwise I hope ya haven't stopped writing, like it seems everyone else here. Im sure it hasn't come to that, so I digress. keep in touch!
I understand your confusion on how the guidance counselor found out, but usually in the case of teenage pregnancies, the parents will call the school up and inform the staff. Or at least that's what happened to a classmate of mine when her parents found out she was pregnant. Sorry for the confusion x: