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  • fading away;

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    awesome! :)
    I'm eating a jawbreaker
    September 8th, 2009 at 11:43pm
  • fading away;

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    Lol, that's alright.
    so whats up?
    September 8th, 2009 at 08:36pm
  • CarryOnWanderer

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    ah I'm sorry my critique was kinda... complicated... and long... lol I tend to try to get all the details in, or the ones i can find in your poem, into a paragraph at least :) np hope to read more from you soon!
    September 8th, 2009 at 02:30am
  • la-la_Cailyn!

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    thanks for the poem comment
    September 5th, 2009 at 10:26pm
  • schwizzle

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    its really good :)
    September 4th, 2009 at 01:18pm
  • Undead.Army

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    I cant speak German -_-
    I'm back to Turkey and I broke my iphone at the gate of the airport, thank God it still woks just the screen is broken
    I will tell her ; )
    I miss her too. The last time I saw her was in June the last day of school, then she went on vacations so we couldnt see each other :( :D
    September 1st, 2009 at 11:32pm
  • Undead.Army

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    thanks for the comment : D
    but I cant update now I'm gonna watch Joh Tucker Must Die lol xD
    tomorrow I'm going back to Turkey and I'll hopefully update wednesday :D
    I know sounds late but thats all I can do :P
    I want to read them cause I love them but its like I never have a a time ugh ! -_-Thanks but I think my stories are cheesy and boring :S :D :P
    Weeeeeeeeeeeeell... I cant speak German .. I suck :D
    Today I said "Ich habe durst" to my dad and he was like wooooooow you talked in German I'll buy you any drink you want oh and btw if you dont know that means I'm thirsty :D
    August 31st, 2009 at 10:39pm
  • Undead.Army

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    thaanks : D
    I think its a bit cheesy and yeah I did -_-
    No one actually comments, I only have 13 comments on Don't Trust A Jonas and most of them are for the song :D
    I made a Jonas hater read the story :P
    I mean I think I did, I didnt say go read she just found it and read it lol.
    I have to update Don't Trust A Jonas. Oh man I cant think of anything -_-
    And I really want to read your story What Did I Do To Your Heart but I never have a chance, Im shopping like crazy for my friends in Germany I hope I can read it when I go back in Istanbul :/
    And I want to read kidnap my heart too o.O
    I like your stories soo much :D !
    August 30th, 2009 at 11:59pm
  • Undead.Army

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    Sorry I mixed the names -_- (its cause I'm sucha fool :D )
    I inspired from your story Your Full Of Suprises now Aren't you?
    I have a bad memmory and I'm a total dumbass :D
    August 30th, 2009 at 06:45pm
  • Undead.Army

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    hahaasasaahahah D:
    She's 14 days and a year older than me :]
    I'm writing a new story kinda inspired from your story I'm The Girl You Used To Know and Selin's old story Sorry. I'll be happy if you check it out ( it means please check it out or I'll cry in my language haha jk :D )
    August 30th, 2009 at 06:39pm
  • AliCoffen._.

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    heyy! im onna im u if ur on
    August 30th, 2009 at 07:08am
  • mockingbird;

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    So whats up?
    August 30th, 2009 at 04:20am
  • fading away;

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    Oh, thats cool!!!!!

    So how long have you been writing?
    August 30th, 2009 at 02:38am
  • Undead.Army

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    Selin and I were born on the same month but we dont have same signs :( :D
    I wont tell anyone ; )
    August 30th, 2009 at 01:24am
  • mockingbird;

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    Yeah lolz I never got into it and now I can't
    August 29th, 2009 at 03:39pm
  • Undead.Army

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    :( yeah she did. It's okay I know how to keep a secret ;)
    I love my friends too yea, Seln is like a big sister to me she tells me what to do :D but it doesnt bother me cause she's doing it for my own good.:D
    I hate my mom she's remaried to a pervert -_-
    he tried to rape her in front of me in the livingroom...
    August 29th, 2009 at 02:14pm
  • AliCoffen._.

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    hey twinny
    August 29th, 2009 at 08:02am
  • Undead.Army

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    ahsahsahha :D (btw that's how I laugh.. I know creepy.) I listen to Hollywood Undead next to my mom (they say fuck at least once in a song) and she doesnt care well she doesnt even know what a fagget is -_-
    but my dad.. I listen to those songs with him and he even wanted some of the songs for himself :DI LOVE HIM! He's so incredible and he is a jonas fan fyi :D
    I made him one last summer. He loves sos, hold on, thats just the way we roll, asutralia, games, just friends, year 3000, kids of the future, BB good, burning up, shelf, one man show, lovebug, cant have you, pushing me away, sorry (I wrote as track nmbers so I wouldnt miss one) he didnt really listen to Lines vines and trying times yet like I made him listen to it but he has to listen to it like 7 times :D but he liked dont speak and poison ivy .. YAAAAAY :D
    he likes hey stephen by taylor swift too :D
    and now I sound like I'm a show off. but seriously I love my dad !! :D
    August 29th, 2009 at 01:39am
  • mockingbird;

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    You used to model? Thats really cool! I'm trying to get into stuff like that kinda.. :)
    August 29th, 2009 at 12:17am
  • Undead.Army

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    I tried that once with blue but my hair is too dark I guess noone noticed it -_-
    and I asked my mom if I could dye it she said okay but not much. Like I was gonna dye my whole hair. :D
    I have a dumbass mom :D
    August 28th, 2009 at 10:46pm