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Yeah, I mean he could tell the cops about them or something else horrible, or he could actually just be a nice guy and their friend, but who knows..... Since I've got everything written out (except a few more sentences need to be added here and there) it would be difficult to put too much more in about Arin as well, you know? I mean, at least with Mike it was really easy ae lol. Thanks :) It's so big deal, really. I like to show my appreciation for them :)

Ok you know I'm gonna say awesome comment and thank you for it :) Some pretty good predictions there.... I do see what you mean about Arin. I probably should have made that chapter longer by developing him more, you know? I guess that could be due to me doing my best to focus on Sophia and Jimmy instead, and maybe also because I know barely anything about Arin lol all I know is that he's joined the band, end of story lol. I'm glad you enjoyed reading :) Also, I'd just like to say, to you, that a person didn't get the man they wanted (mainly because everyone wanted Matt lol) and also a guy doesn't keep the girlfriend that is originally cast. So bear that in mind as you read the next few chapters ;)

Thank you for the story comment! :D And to answer your question, yes, the steps are quite true. :3

It's about a band (surprise surprise...) and two girls who fall in love with two of the guys. Well, that's the direction it will take, and I just know it has potential from what we've written so far (but haven't posted, and hence why I suggested after a few more chapters have been posted) and yeah.... I just sorta want someone to read it, you know? So it's a learning experience for both of us.

Yeah I definitely will! Can I ask if you would be interested in a new story I've started? It's a co-write that we really enjoy writing but no one has read it yet lol I mean, any sort of feedback would be nice, so maybe after a few more chapters are posted could you maybe read it for us? And give con crit too? No pressure, I really don't mind, but yeah....

Omg really? :D Wow..... I dunno what to say lol

Thanks for the comment. I really do appreciate that you appreciate why it has to be slow, and I promise it will build up soon enough!

Aw thanks :) I figured it wasn't that great. I mean, there's sorta a few kinda filler chapters at the start, but you sorta need them to see what happens, the changes, and how they get to where they'll be for the crazy stuff. But if you think it's good, then everyone else must think so too :)

Thanks for the comment :)

So good to hear :)

That is fine, I totally understand, considering I went on hiatus for my whole University year. Thank you so much for your comment - it made my day! :D Glad you'll be waiting for the update. Thank you.

Aw well thanks for explaining :)

Like what? Enlighten me lol.

How? I doubt I actually make people think about the issues I address in my stories

I just hope my stories make a difference to people as well ae.

Lol and if it wasn't for people like you commenting, there wouldn't be stories!

Well thank you :)

Lol thank you so much :)

Lol oh ok.... Lol glad you love reading that much :)

Uh what? To Live Her Life???
And the next chapter will be posted when I decide what I'm doing with the series ae. Sorry, it might take a while