thanks for the comments :) they are much appreciated.
for the poem Days Gone Past, thanks for the advice, i dont usually change my poems, but i do make new versions of them. such as with my poem Golden Glow, i have bout 3 or 4 different versions. Also the idea behind Days gone past is that it is more reciting memories then metaphors if you get that?
Also with your comment on Blood will run like water. i find that ironic, because i was inspired by a series of novels by Sean William, mainly around the 2nd series, the books of the cataclysm. I would recommend it, its a good read, and very prophetic :D lol