Haha, I actually had Zoe punching Dave in the face in the original draft for the chapter, but figured it wouldn't do her any good in the long run and so she's a little victimized. It's good - she's becoming soft. Anyway, thanks for commenting :D
Wow, thanks for the comment. I never really expected anyone to ever really comment on that one, I just posted it because I didn't want to lose it to the black hole that is my room.
Want to remind you that your story is due for my contest on Halloween. I'm terribly sorry but I can't take any after than unless you get back to me before that with the promise that you'll get in in the first week of November. Once again, sorry.
keep up the good work !