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  • luckystars

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    Yes. I shall be. I'm sitting down and editing and basically not moving til it's done. there's only one part that I'm still wishy washy on and I just need to convey something else into it that I think is missing. hopefully I'll be able to get that in there.

    But yea, turns out -- no poor awg in this one. it was supposed to be but not anymore.
    June 20th, 2009 at 10:46pm
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    1st, lurking. I agree with lucky lucky :) Hickey's are gross and tacky! So white trash IMO.

    And like I said at the end of the chapter, if I don't get response, I'm gonna keep it among friends. Which means I'll keep writing but won't spend time and effort posting. Updates via email :)

    I'm excited to see how I end Is This Love too. That story has a mind of it's own. Just LOOK what happened in the last chapter?!?! I didn't plan that until it just started happening.
    June 20th, 2009 at 10:30pm
  • luckystars

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    speaking of which...I just finished the next chapter and am about to start hardcore editing it. You may not be saying "Poor AWG" at the end anymore...oopsie.
    June 20th, 2009 at 10:29pm
  • luckystars

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    yay! I wasn't reading into things! lol I was afraid I read too much into the hickey...fyi: If I was kaelie...AWG'd get smacked on principal of giving me a hickey. That's like branding. So tacky.

    :)

    I don't wanna say "Poor AWG!" I'm doing enough of that in my own story. lol Ok, I shall wait and see my dear.Wait and see.
    June 20th, 2009 at 09:13pm
  • TheLondonlush

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    Still waiting for someone that isn't you, bridget, ashlea, or candace to tell me what they think, haha. With Is This Love nearing it's highly anticipated conclusion, I figured it was time.
    June 20th, 2009 at 08:33pm
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    prologue for getaway is up :)
    June 20th, 2009 at 08:10am
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    I needed a little Money to get me through the chapter! This chapter was the easiest I've written for this story in a long time. How crazy is that? And it was all built upon that tiny exchange Layla and Kevin had post sex haha.
    June 19th, 2009 at 07:43pm
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    Haha we will alway write together from now on then :)
    June 19th, 2009 at 07:28pm
  • kacixlayne

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    Are you sure it wasn't in Kaelie's house?
    June 15th, 2009 at 07:15am
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    Haha yeah, I don't remember when but I read something you wrote and it had him coming down the stairs kind of in a frazzled rush.
    June 15th, 2009 at 07:13am
  • luckystars

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    LOL - i think I might like her too much for her to be sleeping with AWG too...but I know what happens in the story *mwahahaha*

    nah, he's not that much of a prick is he? I've been trying to paint a complex individual who uses humor/immaturity to mask a much deeper psyche. Mainly, cause I know absolutely nothing really about him/the band. So this might as well be an original fic with a "face" (so to speak)

    It's also about the only thing I can physically write right now for some reason. I'm slowly trodding away at everything else but this one is flowing soooo I'm writing it.

    Glad you like it. :) I really like your's too *hint hint*

    <3
    June 15th, 2009 at 06:11am
  • QwertyDork

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    Bwahahaha, you're right. I'm a little embarrassed.
    My two years of French is really [i]not[/i] paying off>.<
    Public education, bleh.
    But hey, it's okay.
    Thanks for pointing it out and most of all thanks for reading:]
    May 24th, 2009 at 08:23am
  • luckystars

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    Ah yes, she told me she's your ghostrider. lol. Mandi rocks. I heart Mandi.
    May 23rd, 2009 at 06:29am
  • luckystars

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    Welllll so long as you keep writing Caught Up... we're all good. lol
    May 23rd, 2009 at 06:23am
  • luckystars

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    oh yes...indeed. I was working on it earlier but then I fell asleep on the couch. Soo, like I said, might be a few days. I've still gotta get updates out of some other stuff probably first.
    May 23rd, 2009 at 06:13am
  • luckystars

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    I know. I know. But it's a New Year's story - so I get to go with the totally obvious implications of the title - and lyrically it can be applied very much to Greg's relationship with what happened in the Jonas-camp since...well...they're showing up.
    May 23rd, 2009 at 06:03am
  • luckystars

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    Yea....I never DISliked them - I just never paid much attention til I saw them live. Now I like them.
    Though their fans sucked. It was like a Jonas Brothers Mosh Pit - kids who are used to moshing...but want to rip AWG's clothes off and are 12.

    Speaking of Greg and Katy - I'm actually probably going to post the final part of Back With You really really soon. I'm literally working on the last section of it right now.
    I'm so glad you see the realism in them - that's what I'm most afraid of with the series; going too over the top. I don't want them to seem like they have this pitch-perfect love affair...or too rough relationship either. I just want two people who adore each other and have these not so perfect lives that they're trying to rebuild.
    May 22nd, 2009 at 11:24pm
  • luckystars

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    Yea. I'm definitely Team Alex...and it's still weird for me cause they were barely a blip on my radar until they opened for The Fobz. Damn you Wentz. We really need to have a long discussion one of these days. Like I needed another band to enjoy. lol

    Thanks so much. I'm ridiculously in LOVE with Katy and Greg. I'm also trying to keep it as "original fiction" as possible so that if I wanted to turn it into a real book I'd have a lot less "creative editing" to do. Kevin and Dee will always be my blood sweat and tears so I'm glad you're enjoying that (her family is kind of rad). And The Job is getting worked on -- freaking medical research takes time though.
    May 22nd, 2009 at 10:40pm
  • TheLondonlush

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    How will I need to add to that super amazing perfect-as-it-is scene? ;) I'm excited to see it in the context of the story
    May 22nd, 2009 at 06:01am
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    Well, you've heard of CMMMX, right?! Cage Match 2010!! Are YOU ready? That's what the banner is from.

    Thank you so much for reading! I'm so glad you liked it (obvi, except for the note...cause who likes to see Nick J's life threatened?)!
    March 26th, 2009 at 03:31am