hello :)
just here to let you know that your entry for my contest:
http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/164448/1/
is due March 10th, and today is the 8th :)
so you don't have much time!
just to let you know :)
Your comments are always very much appreciated. :) Thank you so much! It was very nice of you to look through my work. Have you posted up anything in particular you'd like me to look at?
Thanks for the comment. :)
Yeah, I know. I was bummed too, and I actually didn't plan for that to happen, but it just kinda...did. :/
Yeah, I've never had much trouble with them either--but maybe because we control a native to it or something. Because the one blond Kokiri always says that outsiders become those skeleton warrior things, so I can only assume they go mad.
I won't be able to write that fast anymore since I'm back to work and the shifts take everything out of me specially the afternoons. But thanks a lot for your comments! Besides the test scores...I guess its the attitude and personality as well y'know? Im guessing that when SDA was first founded, it was only Roots, bt steadily Mr Christopher kept including more sections as he became more tolerant about the exams.
But thanks a lot. I'll do my best to get in another couple of chapters during the weekend.
Thanks.
I'm glad the story's over, too. It was fun to write, but it really isn't very good. There were some parts I liked, but mostly it was predictable, melodramatic, and not very interesting.
I did like my characters, though. (:
Hahaaaa, the fight. I was trying to come up with a good reason for him to leave, and I think that was a good one. Yes, it was over-dramatized (you should have seen it when I tried to write the dialogue D: ), but I think it made sense. Parker already has a bit of a temper issue, and he had already been under a lot of stress and stuff.
It just seemed like he had to not show up, but not because he was deliberately ditching her. *shrug*
No worries. I like the theme of the story with Merc being the bad girl and yet the main character. Its usually difficult to write a bad girl as a main character - being a goody goody is so much easier :P Oh did you write chapter 3? Na.. I guess your computer malfunctioned or something. I've only read till chapter 2. Write more please! Jake Abel hey? Interesting. NIce to meet ya too :)