Thank you. and I figured it would, my sentence structure isn't too great, and I'm in a bit of a block. I'm also just trying my hand at third-person narrative so I could understand if it's not too great. :)
LOL.
nice steal by the way.
haha yeah i get it now :) poor nathan and Olivia...they jsut had to go freaking die :) yay! Everyone loves Saul. Except for one gil, she is in love with Botis....although he is such a newcomer to the story...
haha baby girl that was what i was looking for :) I know in the first one there was a lot of unanswered questions (They will be answered in this one) Haha! I know this one is funnier :) I'm updating tonight.
Okie dokie dollface :) Thanks for the story comment. I'll explain Saul to you; Saul hasn't changed his looks at all...if that were to happen I would say so in my story. I know you don't entirely understand him right now, and that is the point. Everything about him will come together soon. I purposely only made you know that he can't be with Ali for unknown reasons and he is treating Ali like she is scum for again, unknown reasons. Now, I know they had a makeout session in chapter 2, but that only happened because Saul was dead for six months and was brought back to life to make things natural again. He is in love with her for goodness sakes, and couldn't stand not kissing her or holding her. So, he wanted one last thing with Ali....before...dun dun dun! You won't know what he's hiding until like...chapter 6 or something. But, when a Guardian dies during a time of war then he or she is brought back to life to restart everything. :) There you go dollface, you now have an adantage from the other readers; you know just a little bit more about what the hell is going on. This will all be explained later on in the story :)
aww i'm glad you liked my story, it makes me feel like i've done something right lately to hear criticism like that :D
i'll update as soon as i can just for you :)
xoxo
You wanna run them by me?
I may be able to answer them myself.
:)