Well you should find inspiration! I, on the other hand, have practically no hope in finding any....although I am starting another story that i actually like....But I'm not sure if I'm gonna post it on Mibba or not.
It is NOT crappy!!! Compared to other stories on this site, it is pretty damn good lol and same here.....the sparkly undead should be hated by everyone....vampires or zombies are not meant to be crossed with faeries. It's just not right.
I enjoyed your story.....Especially in the summery where you warned people of your intolerance to all the sparkly bullshit that makes me question humanity. Made my day. :)