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  • michell-e_:3

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    Hetake's the dad
    October 24th, 2009 at 08:53pm
  • michell-e_:3

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    lol ok, so after the whole beach insident i was thinking of making Hetake feel super guilty for a couple of days. But so guilty that he was ashamed of even talking to heSerena, so then Serena started feeling like she should do something that would make him stop feeling guilty sooooo... she sort of *cough* tempted him if you know what i mean *wink* anyway after that... um... something happened that made Hetake not have those crazy mood swings. i think some of his personal doctors would have made some kind of potion or some crap like that so that he wouldnt rape Serena anymore. But then some crazy guy who i would have made up, came along and stole Serena and then this whole battle thing happened between that said guy and Hetake. But in the end Hetake managed to take Serena back and from their is where she finds out that shes..... *cue evil music* pregnant!! Dundundun!!!!!! but yea lol, When shes telling Hetake shes crying and telling him that shes sorry and that she didnt mean for that to happen and shes scared that he might be mad at her and all that, but he calms her down and sweetly tells her that its ok. That they'll work it out and everything would be fine, and after she had the baby and everything life was pretty good. fast forward to when the babies about 2 years old, i end the story with Hetake asking Serena to marry him with the baby (which is a boy) holding the ring and saying to his mommy "pwease?"

    Then Serena cries and yadayadayada the story ends with a happily ever after, after she answers yes of course XD

    Wow... that was a looooong ass comment lol =))) Well I hope you would have liked the rest of my story =D
    October 23rd, 2009 at 03:42am
  • michell-e_:3

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    hey, sorry but i dont think i will update my story... =/ if you want i can tell you how i was planning on ending it though
    October 21st, 2009 at 11:02pm
  • g234

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    lol yea i use it alot lol
    October 17th, 2009 at 05:11am
  • FMLYHM Zacky

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    i'm cool and you?
    October 17th, 2009 at 05:04am
  • FMLYHM Zacky

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    Hey
    wats up
    sorry for not commenting for soo long i been pretty busy
    October 12th, 2009 at 01:53pm
  • Hopeless And Young

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    welcome.
    October 4th, 2009 at 08:19am
  • Hopeless And Young

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    Just updated.
    October 3rd, 2009 at 07:59pm
  • Limited-Edition

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    sorry, school kept me busy, just updated, AIS. Enjoy. =)
    October 3rd, 2009 at 04:09am
  • Hopeless And Young

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    Just updated again.
    October 2nd, 2009 at 03:49pm
  • Graceful_Mess

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    I am. I'm just bussy at school. haha. But I will. :]
    October 1st, 2009 at 08:00pm
  • Hopeless And Young

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    I just updated! :))
    October 1st, 2009 at 06:31pm
  • Hopeless And Young

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    thanks.
    October 1st, 2009 at 06:11am
  • Hopeless And Young

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    was it okay or was it bad?
    October 1st, 2009 at 04:30am
  • Hopeless And Young

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    I just updated, and just reminded you.
    Thanks for reading in advance! :)) hahaha, weird.
    September 30th, 2009 at 09:47pm
  • yang_1992

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    thank u
    September 30th, 2009 at 10:12am
  • Hopeless And Young

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    I know, well can't do anything about it. since it's what my brain's telling me what to write.
    September 30th, 2009 at 07:11am
  • Raeble

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    ahhh lol x3
    Really? xP
    September 30th, 2009 at 02:26am
  • Raeble

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    I ammm??? x3
    Whyyyy?
    September 30th, 2009 at 02:04am
  • Hopeless And Young

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    just updated, just to let you know.
    September 29th, 2009 at 04:00pm