Thanks for the poem comment, im not really that great at rhyming and stuff so thats why I kinda do free verse and just hope for the best. Sometimes it turns out alright, other times it does not so, thanks so much for the feedback and comment.
Thanks for the comment<3 and yes, I know the women kind of "had their place" but I hate that (strong feminist) so I thought screw it and I gave them a bit of rights despite the time xD
Thanks for the comment on my poem. I was actually nervous about posting that poem. I didn't know how people were going to react to it. So thanks for the kind words.
hey thanx for the comment on my poem Symphony of Shadows, i really appreciate it (: and i think im being inspired a lot by this book trilogy im reading, the Hunger Games? You mightve heard of it, anyways it is quite dark and depressing but all in all a good read and has an amazing storyline so i feel like the book deserves the credit for providing the inspiration xD lol im weird but you'll get used to it...i hope (:
no one really considers themselves a great poet, other people tell them they are and im telling you that you are set in your ways, your destined fo greatness (:
Thank you for the poem comment. And it is kinda true, the ending was kinda meant to say that all along the girl was me, looking in a mirror. But I see girls like that way too often, and I just want to help them and let them know I'm in the same position as they are. Thank you =)