I'm glad I could help! I love constructive criticism too, it's very hard for Original Fiction writers to get readers so the less mistakes, the better =D
Help me Julie!!!!!!!!!
I need to have you come over or I need to go to your house so you can help me get this Mibba thing figured out!
I want to start writing but I can't figure anything out!!
Lol. Love you!!
~Jas
Yes it was quite scrumptious. But the fellow Tacoians became upset when I ate them. >.<
Woah, that's super fancy and pretty!
On your behalf you are rewarded a gold star! *applause*
Welcome to Mibba please read my story, The Orgin of the Blue Princess and leave a comment. Sorry, I'm really trying to get people to read because I need to know if people like it or not because I want to get it published. (May or may not apply, yes I posted it on the internet. I needed to know what to fix so don't leave a comment telling me that I shouldn't have posted it.)