Okay, thank you. I really didn't mean to be rude or anything, I just wanted to know how your thought process worked so that I could fix it, but I guess it came out how I wanted for the most part. Thank you for the help.
Thank you for the poem comment. I really want to know why you thought it was sad, though. I don't mean to be criticcal about your understanding of it, but the ending was supposed to make it seem happy.
I agree with you on the New moon comment... Jake+RAIN= NUMMEH haha
Me and my friend made this thing up one day and we were both like...
"I wanna lick his abs " hahaha