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Hello! I may seem like some creepy stalker, but trust me; I am far from that. I would really appreciate if you would read my Alex Gaskarth fanfiction! It's my first story, so if you like. Please comment and subscribe!

http://stories.mibba.com/read/291559/What-Makes-It-Wrong-For-Us-To-Fall-In-Love/

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LMAO.
Alex's caterpillar eyebrows are lovely. I'm glad you noticed that line.
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Ah, that must make things much more convenient and easy

Is romji with english lettering?
Oh damn, I thought I had come up with something completely new and original haha. I'll definitely check them out. I don't know nearly enough about APD to start writing a story about it, so hopefully that'll help!
Thank you :]

Ah, I see. It is a pretty difficult language to learn and especially to write. I can't spell in French for shit hahaha.
Japanese would be awesome to know but it seems like it would be fucking hard to learn. It would take me years!

Haha, awww. Yeah, Hershey is pretty good for being the retail price it is. To me, it's too strong in all the wrong places.
Meiji is like smoky and more chocolatey and less milky. So good...

I would want that REALLY red natural hair, but I don't really like the light/orangish reds. That's why I dye it really bright! Hahaha
Really? I love French. I'm not very good at it, but I'm getting there. I was originally going to write the whole story in French but after a few paragraphs I realized it didn't sound very intelligent cuz I didn't know enough of it.

She's really incredibly gorgeous! I wish I could figure out how to get my hair to stay that red.
Well, I guess since I'm the one writing her dialogue and thoughts she kind is like me hahaha, but I picture her much prettier and french-y.

Hey, thanks for the comment!
This story is the first I've tried to write in third person, so sorry for those mistakes. I'll go back and try to find/fix them.
I agree with you about the Susan Coffey thing! Never heard of her before

Aww, thank you for the suggestion - I plan on adding more about candy. I just don't know how I'm going to do it. Thanks again...really helped. (:

Thanks so much for the comment on Darkness Consumes All. Clara definitely needs an ass kicking. I think I am going to start the Novella about Maggie.

Thank you,
M

Like I've said before, Logan's going to be around for a while. He and Chloe are going to remain friends :)

Good observation! I never would have connected the bit about being jaded to "Hero/Heroine."

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Although the story is centered about Alex and Chloe, I'm glad that you enjoyed the bit with Jack and Zooey, as well as Rian and Terra.

Thank you for the comment!

Was it by any chance the Human Centipede tattoo?

Sweet! I'm happy that you enjoyed the song choices in the chapter. "Best of Me" is one of my favorite songs.

Alex will definitely remember to close the basement door next time. lol.

Aw thanks. =) Yeah I've had crazy ideas for my sleeve and I'm so excited to get it done. If you've seen the disney version of Hercules, my sleeve idea is going to be based around the whole pool of souls thing...when Hercules saves Meg from Hades at the end. It's going to be badass. I'm planning on putting a demonic looking Hades on the top of my arm and have the souls flowing around my arm...I'm stoked.

I can't resist writing Jack and Zooey ridiculousness into the story. The fact that they're rooting for Alex makes them really important parts of the plot, too.

Glad you liked the chapter so much :)

Thank you for the story comment. <3
-Fly

[i]I think so, I just lost motivation for it. I kind of hate it in a way. The writing style seems so juvenile that I just want to delete it and rewrite, but I won't. So yes, I probably will.[/i]