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Anytime!

Helloooooo! Ever since chapter seven when I was having a weird time with the whole fiasco between Tommy and Poot, I've thought of the comment of advice you left on that piece. I re-wrote the scene, changing a couple things and keeping about sixty percent of the dialogue. If you could, would you mind going back and reading that section of chapter seven and telling me what you think?

The new part starts from "A bright light slashed in front of me, making me jerk my head up and fail to access an instinct to run," if you don't want to read the whole chapter again. It's just the fight scene. Hopefully this will feel better, overall.

Thank you!

So I see that you're pretty much awesome for giving people constructive criticism on here. At least, based on all the 'thank you' comments that come before this one. I really appreciate you reading again, the feedback is really helping.

And the relationship with the dad was one of the things my English teacher pointed out first when she read through the story, so it makes me happy that you noticed and appreciated the newly added character.

I put a lot of work into SS&OE, so thank you (an infinite amount) for the comment. Hopefully you keep enjoying my updates!

Oh dammit. You're right. I was reading newly submitted poetry, and in my stupidity, clicked on my other open tab, your page, and left my comment. Sooooooo sorry.

Comme ca va?
I read your poetry. Loved it. ^-^

Hiya. I'm Bells. ^-^

thank you so much for reading,
and your comment being the first on It's A Shame I'm A Dream. <3
xx

No problemo x]
it's a really cool story
I'll be waiting for the next update!

I meant Owl City has nothing to do with the story. There I go getting all excited again. Lol.

Thank you for the constructive critism. I agree that the story really has nothing to do with the story, but it does with Amanda and her character.

I agree that I will have a grammar mistake every once in awhile, which goes to me not being perfect. I just get excited and don't pay attention closely enough.

As to the "Ugh, poop" thing, I'm going to use it often only because it's a phrase that Amanda uses often. It's part of her character, and I say this because Amanda's a real person. A close friend in fact.

Thanks for mentioning the cliche relationship too. Even though I wasn't planning on it being a typical love story it was nice to have it pointed out to keep my eyes open if it leans towards that way.

Once again, thanks for the advice and thanks for reading :)

Thank you for the advice! and yeah about the grammar....that is defiantly my weak spot! Thank you for the comment it made my day :)

Thank god! lol no problem i like complementing people when they write something worth while :) maybe if you have a spare moment do you think you could check out my stories and comment so i can get your opinion on what is good and what i need to improve on?

Hey, I'm Maria and I just wanted to say; Loved your story and your writing itself along with the plot, and of course psychology makes my world :)

Welcome to Mibba please read my story, The Orgin of the Blue Princess and leave a comment. Sorry, I'm really trying to get people to read because I need to know if people like it or not because I want to get it published. (May or may not apply, yes I posted it on the internet. I needed to know what to fix so don't leave a comment telling me that I shouldn't have posted it.)

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