I honestly didn't plan for that to happen... it just kinda did lol. I sorta like it though... I just need to figure out what's going to happen in NZ haha.
I STILL don't know yet lol.
But since the dew tour's this weekend and I think Louie and Mason are on it, it will help... some lol.
After I update one of my joint stories, I was going to try and work on the next chapter :D
Haha, yeah I guess Rachel is starting to bug me too, but it is the only way I know how to write her. I think any girl in a story like this usually becomes annoying after a while.
Omg!
You're from Barrie!? I was there ovebthe summer for MTrebch concert!, I'm from Peterborough like 3 hours away! : D
Sorry, I get excited when I meet another Canadian : )
I think the only reason the chapter is so boring is cause I am making it that way. But I just feel like Rachel is always surrounded by evan or tobey. So for this one I am getting rid of them and letting her be alone. But she isnt exactly a fun person on her own.
I am dying to write more, but I cant get pat this next chapter, it is so boring that it is difficult to write, but I know that it has to be written. Because after it is going to be the big bang, the whole point of the story leading to the climax and I promise you there is a whole lot of Tobey to come.
Thank you for the wonderful comments. I actually heard that from a few others but to be honest I never really read those books, only part of them. But dont worry after someone commented on that before I complteley changed things to make sure it would turn out nothing like that. I can tell you the story is a whole lot more cliche than people can really see.
Thank you for commenting. That is funny cause I already have this story on another site so there is like 16 chapters alreadydone. And everyone is like choosing teams and a lot of them are Team Tobey.