Devil's_ Angel_Demon / Comments

There are ways to get free word processors, so that you don't have to keep changing:

http://www.thefreecountry.com/utilities/wordprocessors.shtml

I got this page by searching "free word processors" on google. If you don't like any of those, search it. You're bound to find at least one.

Love Sheen

Have you gotten anymore of your story done yet?

Love Sheen

I just looked it over. You missed some paragraph spacing at the end. You have lines down one, but didn't put an actual space between them.

Love Sheen

Yes, I saw your email. Sorry, I just wasn't home all day and couldn't reply.

Love Sheen

My email is lihrke@hotmail.com

I'll get your story off of here, edit it and send you my editing job in an email when I get it done. I should be able to do it tonight, but I'm not entirely sure. Sound good?

Love Sheen

Alright. So you want mainly grammar edited. Do you want me to look at the clearness of a sentence at all? Because I know sometimes you write a sentence one way because in your head it makes sense, because in your head you have all the details, but to an outside source it can be confusing. Or do you just want me to let you know if I find a sentence like that and have you take a look at it?

Alright. Thanks for giving your opinion. That's actually the part of her comment that makes me the most angry too. Where she actually starts telling you what you're allowed to say when commenting her.

Love Sheen

I'd be willing to be a beta for you, but you have to be really specific about what you want me to do and what you don't want me to do, as I will completely go off if you don't (I love editing and get a little carried away).

Also, I'm not an actual beta for the site, so I don't have any of the privileges that they have here on the site, and we would probably have to do it all through email. You'd still have to update your story on your profile yourself and whatnot after I get done with it.

Ummm. . . There was one other thing I was going to put in here, but I don't remember what. . . I don't remember. I'll just come back if I remember what it was.

Also, on a side note. I see you have a comment on Serizenna. I'm currently working with a few people to get her to stop doing that (whether we need to go to a higher power or not), and I just need the opinion of a newcomer to the site. Did her comment come off to you as rude? Did it make you kind of angry that she is sitting her demanding you read her story when you're just joining the site? Any opinions at all that you have would be helpful.

Love Sheen

Well thanks. And yeah tell me about it the one thing I hate is proof reading. lol

hey there!
thanks for the add and the story comment!
seems like you're new here, so welcome to mibba!!
XD

Welcome to Mibba please read my story, The Orgin of the Blue Princess and leave a comment. Sorry, I'm really trying to get people to read because I need to know if people like it or not because I want to get it published. (May or may not apply, yes I posted it on the internet. I need to know if there will be enough postive re-inforcement to have it published. So, don't leave a comment telling me that I shouldn't have posted it.)

Pretty good on this end too. Really bored though. I'm trying to find something to do, so I'm amusing myself by greeting new users.

Love Sheen

Hey! Welcome to Mibba!

How's it going?

Love Sheen