could you do me a favour hun and keep betaing my story? You can acess it through this site...I've gone through it a lot and I hope its ok...I just need you to check punctuation and stuff :) Also the comma monster or whatever you call it...I found a place where it spewed its guts out! I've tried to edit that too...it's in the first chapter...the bit you didn't read :D
June 29th, 2009 at 02:06am