And also thanx for not being to harsh... I know you're proabley not intrested, but still I always ask if you'd like to see where this story is really going ask for chapter two that will be posted only if there is enough demand.
I don't think I'll start the story out clamier or change that Alsia foreshadowed it, but however I did find one good piece of advice, making where the kindom is at more clearly... Thank-you for reading I appercaite it.
There is no way you could be hasher than what some of the other people have already said. I've already been told that it is un-orignal, that I can't write, that I have no hope of getting it published... I've heard it all already... So just read it and give me your opion if you want too.
Welcome to Mibba please read my story, The Orgin of the Blue Princess and leave a comment. Sorry, I'm really trying to get people to read because I need to know if people like it or not because I want to get it published. (May or may not apply, yes I posted it on the internet. I need to know if there will be enough postive re-inforcement to have it published. So, don't leave a comment telling me that I shouldn't have posted it.) Ps. I also have some aswome poems if you'd like to check them out too