kk, thats good. i would definetly buy your story if you published it :) then i could say "i have read the original story and talked to the auther." haha, that would be so cool :) im guessing your a twilight fan...? Ahaha me 2. Eclipse comes out in 2 days ;)
I wont kell you, i just will really want to read your story, and i will check almost every day :) i really enjoyd the first part, maybe we can compare stories and storie ideas sometime... :)