I knew it. XD
And if you make more paragraphs, then maybe, you'll be able to make a title. Because that's how I make it in my stories, well not here in Mibba but in homework or something. =D
Ooohhh.... Nice.
Do you have a title for it yet? It's a very good story, even with two paragraphs. I love the way you described your surroundings. It's like I'm the one experiencing it. XD