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  • warmaiden

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    Thank you very much for the comment on my journal. I am thinking of starting the vampire first so I will make sure to give you a heads up on when I post it :)
    May 1st, 2012 at 05:36am
  • hangsang.

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    Also, I didn't really mean to come off as that stereotypical. It's just really really rare that you see 'preppy girls' and Goth girls hanging out together where I'm from.
    April 26th, 2012 at 02:10pm
  • hangsang.

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    Those are very good points. I'll try and change the chapter a little.
    April 26th, 2012 at 11:03am
  • hangsang.

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    Thank you for commenting on [b]It's Fun Walking Through Your Own Funeral[/b]. I have a question about what you said, though.
    [i]I think you should work on more telling than showing.[/i] I actually got confused by that, because I've been told in all of my Writing/Literature classes that I need to show more. Make the reader see what I am. Maybe you meant something different than I did. Could you elaborate a little more on that, please?
    Also, about the 'stereotypes'. In the school I go to, it's very typical that girls stop being friends or do not be friends with each other because of stereotypes. It's realistic in my school.
    April 25th, 2012 at 02:16pm
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    Thank you for the story comment. I totally agree :)
    April 18th, 2012 at 03:27am
  • Vulpes Vulpes

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    Thank you for the story comment <3
    April 3rd, 2012 at 07:23pm
  • swell

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    Thanks for the story comment and the edit, I'll be sure to change that :)
    April 2nd, 2012 at 11:34pm
  • LoveForGiraffes

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    I extended the 13 drabbles contest so if you still want to submit your entry, you have until Monday night dear <3
    March 31st, 2012 at 08:12pm
  • under the sea'

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    Hi there! This is just a reminder that there is only ONE WEEK until your entry for 'Themes Contest' is due.
    ( http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/173798/ ) I can't wait to read everyone's entries!
    March 24th, 2012 at 08:07pm
  • choliecole

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    Thanks for the story comment, your constructive criticism was highly appreciated :DDDD
    March 5th, 2012 at 11:12pm
  • lucky luciano

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    Thank you for the story comment :)
    March 4th, 2012 at 05:03pm
  • Painted Smiles

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    Actually, it's set in 2012. Even now people are racist and they say whatever they want even on live TV. So...I have nothing else to say on the "dark skinned teen" thing. A few months ago in my area, the news person actually said black guy out loud and he didn't get in trouble for it.....

    I don't know...
    February 25th, 2012 at 09:01pm
  • louis tomlinson.

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    Thank you for the story comment :)
    February 25th, 2012 at 01:36am
  • Painted Smiles

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    The thing is....there is going to be a lot of racism and sexism and other offensive things in the story :3

    It shows how much people judge you from the color of your skin to the money in your pockets. The comment made by the reporter was to show that he/she was also racist or doesn't like dark skinned people (:

    It's hard to explain :3
    February 25th, 2012 at 01:34am
  • linamuffin92

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    Hey, I want to be on the Bad Girl's club story :)
    February 21st, 2012 at 01:04am
  • Painted Smiles

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    In response to your comment on my journal, the title is supposed to be obvious I guess. I have no other title that describes the story perfectly.
    February 19th, 2012 at 10:14pm
  • Sight of the Blind

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    Just tell me what you want me to read and I'll go leave a review (:
    February 19th, 2012 at 09:15pm
  • Sight of the Blind

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    Congratulations, you were one of the free read winners!
    February 18th, 2012 at 07:14pm
  • Nanook

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    Aw, you're welcome! :D
    Hope that you can figure things out and keep the inspiration. Aha. :D
    February 13th, 2012 at 12:30am
  • Dorkiness

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    Thank you for the story comment. I hope you enjoy the full-length story. =]
    February 12th, 2012 at 10:13pm