Thanks for the comment. It's not really a band-fic. It's just featuring some guys that are in bands. You won't hear much talk about bands, other than the one Oli is in.
I don't understand what you meant when you said "clicheness." I don't think it's really cliche at all. It's pretty original. Anyway, your opinion. Thanks for the tip about the simple stuff. I'll try making it a bit different.
Thanks for the comment! Yeah, I quit telling people it's fan fiction ahead of time, because I only made it that way so I could use the characters. The rest of the story is just as original as fiction. I like it when people give it a chance. Again, thanks :)
hey, guys. okay, thank you so much for the suggestion! but honestly, it would just annoy me to have to type in the html stuff to change the colour or put it in italics. I thought about it, but it would really annoy me. I'm sorry! if you REALLY think that I should, if it's THAT confusing, then I shall reconsider. but thank you so much for the constructive criticism. c: