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Hahaha, I'm glad you appreciated my comment. It defeats the purpose of the whole site if you don't try to give real feedback.

I'm really excited for you to update that story. I really want to know where it goes. God, Zach as a teacher? Alright, this might be too much information, but I'm totally picturing his personality similar to one of my professors at school. This prof is honestly drool-worthy...Sorry, I just got back from his class >__< hahaha.

I agree with you. Bringing in a whole whack of characters is like information overload. There would just be too much for the reader to process, which consequently make your story awful. When I mentioned the pace of your writing, I meant it both structurally and with the plot. I'm glad you waited.

Oh yeah, Matt and Brian being the cocky best friends? Absolutely. I'm picturing Brian as like, the track star, or even on the swim team. He's got the build, you know? And I hope you consider making Johnny Zach's colleage. I think Zach needs a friend too, you know? Angie already has the adorable Jimmy and Leana, so share the love sweetie! Plus, I can just see Johnny as a teacher. He's got that quiet confidence. There's also that picture floating around where he dressed up in a button-down shirt with a lose tie, and he was holding a cigarette...mmmmmnnnnn. I'm a Zacky lover all the way, but that picture was pretty damn hot.

I'm not going to lie, I'm a huge fan of the sex stories >__< Sounds pretty sick and wrong. But it can be done really well; I've seen it happen. In regard to the student/teacher romances, I do agree that the majority of them seem to be excuses for hardcore word porn, but then again I've seen erotica done tastefully as well. To be honest, in a student/teacher romance, I think it's something that would be evident in the relationship. You've got an older individual who's had the experience, and you've got a hormonal adolescent hanging out with the experienced one...that's, once again, my opinion. I just think that it's something you have to deal with, but if it's done right, it can be great. I think the best way to approach it is to make sure the sex means something; not just on an emotional level, but in the plot. I find the stories that use sex to reiterate or transition the characters into a different relationship setting to be very strong.

I'm glad you're bringing in the other girls. That's going to be fun!

No problemo. I was thinkin about you and zacky anyway...
Mmm..spicyness

Oh. I miss those one-shots.
Oh I was wonderin if you would like to be a star in one of mine.

theres a theme.
for some reason i was thinking like cheesey cliche
porno scenes.
like the school girl
or the nurse
or the girl next door.
the cheesy scenrios types.

Gina love!
I was wondering if you wanna be a part of a collections of one shots for me?

It's over... I'm sad. But happy with how it ended =] It was seriously an amazing story and you should be very proud =]

Ahh, yes. I've seen that picture many times. haha. But sounds interesting.. hope it works out like you have planned in your head =D

But yes, looking forward to more of Queen Bee and the new one! =)

I was so damn happy! I was waiting.. hoping... that they wouldn't really be dead and I was like "HELL YES!" when I read it. hahaha. Though I look forward to finding out how they 'played dead' and got away with it. hahaha.

Really?! Only two? Okay, that bums me out =( It's such a good story... I don't want it to end. But alas, I know it has to. Oh, Queen Bee! I'm really loving that story, so I hope you go back to it soon =) What's your new one to be about?

not much here either...lol
i finally have a break from working so i'm hanging out on the computer and trying to get some writing done, but YouTube is distracting me xD

thanks so much for the comment on my journal.
this here is the link to the site:
http://alittlepieceofheavenfics.ning.com/

hey there!
what's up?!

Glad you liked them =)

Yes, I got the subscription notification thingy and I'll read once i've finished replying to profile comments =)

Okay, sounds good! Can't wait for it =)

Okay, well, I couldn't find the perfect pic of Megan.. but I picked one of a girl with thick curly brown hair and I think her eye colour is green, but in the banner, it just looks very light and you can't tell they're green. She's not young looking as I would've prefered, but I figured it could pass coz she's been through a lot which would make her look a lot more mature than she is.

This is the good one:

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b31/talease/HP.jpg

I tried to do the life/death thing, by using the black and white as contrasting colours... I was a lil at a loss as to how to convey it and that's the best I could come up with.

This one was the first I made:

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b31/talease/HigherPowers.jpg

Yes, I know Jimmy hasn't shown up yet. I'm still sad about Matt and the boys... since he and Zacky are my faves. Along with Johnny. haha. But I'll guess I'll just have to wait and see...

Hey!

Thanks for fixing the font. I'll read all three chapters in just a moment =)

I made a banner. But I'll do another trying to capture what you said about the being seperated through life and death... not sure how i'll do that, but I'll try my best. haha. Do you have an image of Megan? If not, that's fine, no worries.

=)

Hey hun!

I tried to read the updates... but the text is just too hard for me to read. I have pretty good eyesight, but that font just messes with it when I try to read it. Do you think you could make the text bigger or something?

I'll have a go at making you a banner, if you like. Do you have any ideas of what you want? Like, anything specific?

Haha, well, it was worth the trip to the nurses office, I say! But I'm looking forward to the Zacky one, since he's my fav... I loved the Matt one though, he's my second. haha.

Yes, I got the email and I read! It was good! But i'm freaking out about the boys!! I don't want them to be dead =( I want Jacoby to be dead though.. that, i'd be very happy with. haha.

Ohh... I see. No worries. I'm probably the only one who took notice specifically. I guess I'll assume she took a fall off her horse or something. haha.

Oh, yeah, it would've been a scary time. I mean, just the stuff in history books is bad enough.. I don't even want to think about the stuff that happened and was never documented.

I'm glad you enjoy my reviews. Yeah, I tend to comment more on things I specifically liked or noticed. I like getting comments from others like that, so it only seems to make sense I give them. Plus I just talk too much. haha.

Oh, that's okay, I understand. I'll be patient =) Besides, that just means I get more of the new one! =)

I'm doing well, thanks. Hope you are too!

Well, the over defensive thing was understandable from their point of view... they were looking out for their own. And they don't know who she really is, only who she pretends to be.

YAY! I'm sorry I didn't get a chance to look earlier, but I'm gonna do it right now =) And I'm sure I'll love it =)

Thank you for telling me taht it was up!!
I loved it!!!!!!

okay!!!
I was juts wondering because I was so inlove with teh story and I'm hella excited for teh sequel!

Ah!!!I love your Queen Bee story
Yay! for some sexy Zacky =]