The Red Mind / Comments

Hey random person! Whassup?

ryley! get back on mibba chat please! i'm so bored T.T

hahaha.
thank you!

Oh goody!
I love yoshi!
I have 2 yoshi toys, (One big one small,) & i'm getting yoshi slippers. ^_^

Scroll down trust me this will help you

Every night, someone thinks about you before they go to sleep,
At least fifteen people in this world love you.

The only reason someone would ever hate you is because they want to be just like you

There are at least two people in this world that would die for you

You mean the world to someone.

Someone that you don't even know exists loves you.

When you make the biggest mistake ever,

something good comes from it.

When you think the world has turned its back on you, take a look.

Always remember the compliments you've received.
Forget the rude remarks.

So if you are a loving friend, send this to everyone on your list
including the person that sent it to you.

Tonight at midnight your true love will

realize they like you.

Something good will happen to you between 12 in the morning and

four o'clock pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere.
Get ready for the biggest shock in your life

If you break this chain
YOU will be cursed with relationship problems

for the next ten years.
Send this to fifteen people in fifteen minutes

Sorry, lol!

oh, okay. good!

so it worked?

o well i dont think you should be, your really good..
i love your poem dreamscape, its amazing=)

oh, well it was late when i read them, so i'm surprised i caught it at all, lol. to edit them, go to your mibba page (My Mibba), on the right side find the Poem tab. it will be towards the bottom, then click on My Poems. then just click on the little picture thing next to the title of your poems. tell me if you get it

just wanted to say that in your poem Never, i think there is a mistake. the fourth line in the second paragraph

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Hello...and welcome to Mibba.

Ahkay, this is a bit late. I'm sorry.

:-)

Good too thanks, just got back from school.
What you up to?

Hey hun, welcome to mibba!!
I'm Brie : DD

You won't. :-D
You already proved that with your poem and your last line. :-0

(*applauds*)Fantastic!! I'm really hoping that it works too because you have me all worked up over it now. X-D
Good luck with it!

That sounds really intense. I'm already excited about.
What if you wrote it backwards? Write is a draft, and start with that line, then just start playing scenes in your head and what could have possible led up to that. Maybe that'll start giving you ideas in how to start it.

That sounds like an amazing idea! Really original too.
Maybe you could start it when the two are already in the room communicating to each other, king of like a foreshadowing.
Or you could start describing them seperately and how they came to be together...
But it's an amazing idea, so however you choose to start, it's going to be a good read either way.

Write about me :p
Meh nothing is up rn. I'm just insanely bored O_O

Really? Well for writing it in the spur of the moment, I can only imagine what you're capable of when you sit down and just go at it.
You seem like you have that writing niche so you should try writing more poetry. I think you'd be pretty good at it.

Hey, welcome to mibba and all that jazz.
Even though you seem welcomed enough. ;-)
I look forward to more of your postings.
Have a nice day.

~Lorain