Thank you! I've got other stories on my hard drive that I'm gonna post soon, but I have a few things to update first.
Glad you enjoy the stories. :)
xo -Cali
OMG you live in Canada? Holy geeze! That's cool! hahaha
I live in the United States, California. hahaha
It's actually snowing right now, which is cool. XD
You can do anything you can put your mind too, this year has been a big change for me. And I do connect with the story, I mean it's pretty sad to think I still hate myself... Ahhh!!! lol
Anyways, you need to recognize that you're beautiful. :] It's a shame the story is well...you, to think someone else hates themselves or something... is a shame.
I hope you don't abandon it. I really enjoy it. It kinda reminds me of me. I used to weigh 206, and before that I was 226. (I was on meds for awhile, and they made me gain weight & once I quit taking them I lost 20 pounds & stayed at 206 for awhile) up until Sept of '09 did I start losing weight... and I've lost over 50 pounds. Your story reminds me of how I still feel to this day, I look in the mirror and I'm like holy fuck I'm a fatass... -_- Really it sucks... Hope you can add all the real emotions behind people with self image issues in your story. <3
Hay girl haaay. Finally updated my mibba account after..... what? like a year? XD so, yeah, we should deffs do another cowrite. but this one will go somewhere! maybe rewrite L&E? :P
oh, btw, ily biffle. did i mention that? :)
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1) Crip blood, it seemed so erratic and messy (which always appeals to me) yet the words fitted together perfectly and painted a wonderfull picture
2) She Just Wanted You To Love Her, you've got the emotion and tone perfect in this poem. Reading it really reached out it me and the ending was heartbreaking
Could you please read Audrey Smiles and The Runaway?
Thank you <3
I read through all of your poems and picked my two favorites! Here they are, and here are my reasons:
1) Don't You Want To Be Like Them?
I chose this one because I think the theme and topic is really good. It takes all the things we wish for and tells the truth behind how models achieve them. Even though it's dark, I thought it was inspiring. My first reaction after reading it was, "Gross. I guess I don't want to be like them after all!"
2) Crip Blood
I love this one. I think it's very artistic, not that your other poems aren't but I think this one is different. I like how it's so... jumpy almost, yet the words still flow perfectly together. And in the end it tells a story.
All in all I enjoyed pretty much all of your poems, and it was really hard to choose just 2, but I think these are the best for their own special reasons!
In your journal you said you'd read 7 chapters of my story? Can you please read I Wanna Take a Ride on Your Disco Stick? It's a fanfiction, but I tried my best to write it in a way that people who don't watch the show will still enjoy it.
Oh, sorry 4 the late reply too !!!
I'm getting busy too with thw whole graduation and new courses thing :))
Anyway, I'm fine. I just got a new camera !!!!! YAY !!
Oh sorry, I just noticed that comment on my poem. Which was Forwards, in case ya forgot because I would forget. Anyway, thanks for the comment, it means alot! :D I know I have to work on the spelling stuff. My bad. I'll try to fix it up. But thanks! (: