Aka best grandpa ever! Jk. But seriously. My grandpa is an ice cream addict. When I lived with him it was our nightly ritual to eat cookie dough ice cream with Reeses shell topping in a coffee mug. :D
Lol. Seriously! I get run over by a shopping cart every single time I go to Walmart. And everyone looks at me like “Bitch, you shouldn’t have been in my way.”
I might post another one to make up for the shortness.
Lol. I can’t say yet! :X He didn’t really do anything bad. He just kind of made a stupid mistake and blames himself for it. And since his last girlfriend blamed him also, he’s afraid that Pearl will do the same.
Lol. I really wanted it to be similar to Ruby’s but entirely different at the same time. So that made me really happy. ^.^ Unfortunately Pearl and Kellen will need to put up a bit of a fight before they get their happy ending, but rest assured that they will. :D
It's fine. It was no trouble. I was just saying though that I wouldn't be able to comment your story until the next day because I had to go to bed (since I have to get up early).
Yes, Prequel should probably be "prologue" that would make more sense. As far as tense goes, just make sure to keep it all in one time frame. For instance, if you're going to write in past tense, continue to be in past tense. You can always go back and change sentences to past tense.
So I'm the chick below you on the comment swap thread. Sorry it took me so long to get to your story. Classes started this week and I've had an insane work load.
With that said, I can't get a comment on my story unless I comment something of yours and you have deleted your submission. . .so what I am supposed to comment on?